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Below is the poem entitled WORST HIP HOPPIN' RAP LINES which was written by poet nette onclaud. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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what's goin on here
yeah yo hot momma and yo soul sistah
fightin and  freakin
smilin then pic-pac-pic-pac wrestlin
and you makin me go go go
to start another smokin show, 
c'mon lousy dudes
bombin away from all the swoosh
stinkin candy messin down  usher soup
if ya ain't in the groove, go darn losers..move!
better hip it up sloppy studs
ya , ya  wazzup, monster burpin blobs

( geez...i'll understand if you want to clobber me... lol!)

...for PD's hilarious " my worst poem ever"
and #1 poem contest

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  1. Date: 8/6/2014 9:24:00 PM
    Nette,, Congratulations!!! :) On having your poem featured this week. Stopping by to say hi, and greet almost every poem, on the Poetry Soup's home page. Enjoy having your poem for all to read. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

  1. Date: 8/4/2014 9:17:00 AM
    Sounds like a recipe for indigestion. Hot stuff. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver

  1. Date: 8/3/2014 6:10:00 PM
    Lol!.. This is so not you, sweet Nette.. It does, however make me feel a tiny bit better about several of mine!.. :-) ... Hugs.. Arlene

  1. Date: 7/18/2013 10:39:00 PM
    NETTE, :-). Congratulations, with your awesome HIT in the poet destroyer's contest. Hugs & Hugs** SKAT

  1. Date: 7/15/2013 9:26:00 AM
    Too funny Nette.. Enjoyed the rapping. Congrats on the fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 7/14/2013 5:42:00 PM
    Yeah, whazzup sweet soul sistah NetEEE!...This is hot an BOMBIN' stuff mama, and congrads yo! - The Timstah

  1. Date: 7/14/2013 1:46:00 AM
    I liked this then and I like it now. It's a riot, sweetie. Congrats.

  1. Date: 7/14/2013 12:06:00 AM
    Stopping in with smiles.... :-) :-)... Congratulations, Thank you for taking your time and hooking me up with an awesome OLD # 1 hit... I had a hard time choosing the winners... please enjoy my blog when you have time. Hugs & Hugs.... xox~ LINDA

  1. Date: 12/8/2010 11:35:00 AM
    hahaha stinkin candy messin down usher soup Hilarious congratulations yo rapper on yas big win.

  1. Date: 11/26/2010 10:47:00 PM
    Eeuuwwww- Congrats anyhu to you

  1. Date: 11/23/2010 6:14:00 AM
    Congratulations on your 1st Place win in PD'S contest Nette. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/21/2010 8:04:00 PM
    Hahah Nette an absolute monster. Many congratulations for this win.

  1. Date: 11/21/2010 2:11:00 PM
    haha, it's so bad I thought you did it just for the contest. I give it my personal first place! heehee. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 11/21/2010 1:37:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in this great contest..Sara

  1. Date: 11/21/2010 12:37:00 PM
    Congratulations on this well deserved win, nette

  1. Date: 11/21/2010 11:54:00 AM
    Way to go Nette ...number one my friend.. enjoy that top spot for the worst poem ever written..luv.. your amazing talent is so evident on the Soup.. continue entertaining us ..luv.. enjoy your well deserved win and placement..

  1. Date: 11/21/2010 10:35:00 AM
    Nette...congrats on big win.......... Luv/Best wishes.......Hitendra Mehta

  1. Date: 11/21/2010 9:43:00 AM
    yo there funky rapper beltin this blues with a hammer thankin you for makin me a sucker amazin first prize blooper! :)

  1. Date: 11/21/2010 8:41:00 AM
    Nette, this is so funny for the attemp, but i kno you can reverse it to good lines,,lol,,CONGRATULATIONS!!! Had lots of fun with this contest,, have a nice and wonderful day,..p.d.

  1. Date: 11/21/2010 8:24:00 AM
    Nette, super congratulations on your first place in Pd's contest. Enjoyed this ;) Wilma