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Winter's Relief

Let winter come 
And freeze the sky 
No more will shadows cast  
Let showers turn to heaps of snow 
With gardens hidden deep 

Let working cease 
Migration fly  
Let herds to safety dash 
Farmers idle, fires glow 
No fields left to reap 

My picket fence
Blockaded high
No perfect cobbled path
Let winter come, and snowstorms blow   
I need some time to sleep  

By: Kyle Ezra Kriticos

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  1. Date: 10/6/2011 11:03:00 AM
    Like this one a lot. We've got 6 months of the winter out here in Calgary - I will tuck these images in my pocket when I brace the winds.

  1. Date: 9/24/2011 1:49:00 PM
    Very nice!!Enjoyed reading it....

  1. Date: 9/9/2011 10:25:00 AM
    Beautiful imagery, Kyle

  1. Date: 9/8/2011 2:44:00 PM
    I enjoyed reading your poetry today Kyle. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/8/2011 1:55:00 PM
    Heya Kyle. Very strong imagery throughout, and the ending is perfect. Truly captured the reason why winter can be great, despite the freezing sure does sleep better in the winter, eh. I saw your comment on my alliterative poem and chuckled because your own name has the same 'k' alliteration as the character in my poem. You have a very neat middle name.

  1. Date: 9/8/2011 1:15:00 AM
    WOWIE, this is amazing. MY FAVE for the night!!!

  1. Date: 9/7/2011 10:58:00 PM
    Had to chuckle at the last line. You do give the reader something to think about here. Keep on writing and sharing your words. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

  1. Date: 9/7/2011 10:51:00 PM
    A lovely write on winter Kyle, You take the languid approach with resting as the reward. Could feel the effects of that sweet time.