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Why He Beams

Pallid and forlorn,
my heart broke for her.
Never saw such gloom,
but somehow I knew
she shone from within...

She buried that,
feeling dry...gray-
a crumbled mask 
made out of dust.

I asked her
one cold night,
“Do you weep?”

“My tears
    fill up

vowed to
kiss her
every night,
let her feel
she was loved...

And oh! How much
love she can give!
She's still shy, hides
from time to time,
but her smiles break free...
(One can't trap light's glow)

Her warmth makes me beam,
reveled eclipses.

Moon dust becomes blush.

for Catie's Diminished and Advancing Hexaverse Contest  :)

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  1. Date: 9/4/2014 9:23:00 PM
    I clicked on your best poem. Did you know this was it? it really is awesome, Nikko!!! You must have gotten at least one or more fave on it. Is that how it works, do you think?

  1. Date: 9/4/2014 9:23:00 PM
    Also, thanks so much, sweetie, for the birthday message.

  1. Date: 8/5/2014 10:14:00 AM
    "MY TEARS FILL UP SEAS" -----YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS~~~~~~~~~~~~~ A line better than DMT~~~~well, almost:)

  1. Date: 8/5/2014 10:10:00 AM
    serious/nice delivery on this type of Hexadoodle whopper poem.Never mind me, I'm listening to Terance McKenna ramble on about Cart Jung & read poems at the same time. Not a good mixture. Now all I need is some Psilocybin Mushroom Tea. On comments, I dig the way you let it all out. NEVER a short boring response! Keep on keepin on, ON don't leave this site yet. I've got a few things cookin' to improve our poet lives. I will give you the scoop very soon. It is gonna take some effort by us all tho'.

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 5:29:00 AM
    This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.

  1. Date: 4/24/2012 9:43:00 AM
    soupmail - p.s. reveled eclipses or revealed?

  1. Date: 4/9/2012 10:42:00 PM
    Hi, Sweet Nikko. Glad you won. I see this is getting congratulations so CONGRATS, my friend.

  1. Date: 4/5/2012 7:45:00 PM
    i love stories that tell of redemtion and this is a redemtion story.

  1. Date: 4/5/2012 9:30:00 AM
    congratulations on your win! love the last line :) p.s. do people, besides soup people, comment on your work on pft?

  1. Date: 4/4/2012 9:36:00 PM
    Congrats on your win, Nikko! This is an amazing write. I think it should have placed much higher. Just my opinion. A fave for me. Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 4/4/2012 12:44:00 AM
    One for my favourites..So very beautiful Nikko,sweet friend-Charma

  1. Date: 4/3/2012 11:50:00 AM
    Belated congratulations, Nikko! Awesome Dim-Hex-&-Adv! : ) Beautiful! Ruben.

  1. Date: 4/3/2012 5:18:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Catie's contest Nikko. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/2/2012 6:10:00 PM
    Congratulations on a great poem and win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 4/2/2012 4:38:00 PM
    congrats sweet friend Nikko on an exciting win for this exceptional write so electrifying my friend.. awesome as always luv..

  1. Date: 4/2/2012 4:18:00 PM
    I had no idea this one was yours, Nikko! :) Congratulations on your win in my Hexaverse contest. hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 4/1/2012 8:13:00 PM
    Nikko the Sweet you are a poet of the ages this is a masterpiece. A perfect example of a form I wish to learn. Bravo hun bravo. Luv and applause n hugs to you. Michael

  1. Date: 4/1/2012 1:43:00 PM
    So many lovely thoughts enhance your lovely verse Nikko, Wish you all the best in the contest!

  1. Date: 4/1/2012 12:03:00 PM
    opening it for you my little cutie! L & L

  1. Date: 3/30/2012 12:18:00 AM
    Very lovely Hexaverse my dear Nikko. I feel like I'm reading a riddle and I'm tring to guess for the right answer! Hmmm, don't make me think Nikko! A winning piece! I have not been following any contest lately. Busy kasi. I am expecting a dear friend to come visit me in Seattle. Love Dalila