Kabuteng P.Ink K. | + Follow Poet |
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Her Silent Seams

her words,

 now naked.

Finally 

letting them       e
                     e       v
                      v     o
                          l 

and run into
                 silent seams

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Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 2/23/2019 2:53:00 PM Hello Kabuteng P. Ink K., so nice to meet you.I like this poem that you have created. Have a nice day my friend. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/4/2014 9:23:00 PM I clicked on your best poem. Did you know this was it? it really is awesome, Nikko!!! You must have gotten at least one or more fave on it. Is that how it works, do you think? Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/4/2014 9:23:00 PM Also, thanks so much, sweetie, for the birthday message. Login to Reply

Jslambert Mister Roboto Date: 8/5/2014 10:14:00 AM "MY TEARS FILL UP SEAS" -----YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS~~~~~~~~~~~~~ A line better than DMT~~~~well, almost:) Login to Reply

Jslambert Mister Roboto Date: 8/5/2014 10:10:00 AM serious/nice delivery on this type of Hexadoodle whopper poem.Never mind me, I'm listening to Terance McKenna ramble on about Cart Jung & read poems at the same time. Not a good mixture. Now all I need is some Psilocybin Mushroom Tea. On comments, I dig the way you let it all out. NEVER a short boring response! Keep on keepin on, ON don't leave this site yet. I've got a few things cookin' to improve our poet lives. I will give you the scoop very soon. It is gonna take some effort by us all tho'. Login to Reply

Funom Makama Date: 6/11/2012 5:29:00 AM This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon. Login to Reply

Black Eyed Susan Date: 4/24/2012 9:43:00 AM soupmail - p.s. reveled eclipses or revealed? Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/9/2012 10:42:00 PM Hi, Sweet Nikko. Glad you won. I see this is getting congratulations so CONGRATS, my friend. Login to Reply

John Loving Iii Date: 4/5/2012 7:45:00 PM i love stories that tell of redemtion and this is a redemtion story. Login to Reply

Black Eyed Susan Date: 4/5/2012 9:30:00 AM congratulations on your win! love the last line :) p.s. do people, besides soup people, comment on your work on pft? Login to Reply

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 4/4/2012 9:36:00 PM Congrats on your win, Nikko! This is an amazing write. I think it should have placed much higher. Just my opinion. A fave for me. Blessings, Rhonda Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 4/4/2012 12:44:00 AM One for my favourites..So very beautiful Nikko,sweet friend-Charma Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 4/3/2012 5:18:00 AM Congratulations on your win in Catie's contest Nikko. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 4/2/2012 6:10:00 PM Congratulations on a great poem and win. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 4/2/2012 4:38:00 PM congrats sweet friend Nikko on an exciting win for this exceptional write so electrifying my friend.. awesome as always luv.. Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 4/1/2012 8:13:00 PM Nikko the Sweet you are a poet of the ages this is a masterpiece. A perfect example of a form I wish to learn. Bravo hun bravo. Luv and applause n hugs to you. Michael Login to Reply

Elizabeth Wesley Date: 4/1/2012 1:43:00 PM So many lovely thoughts enhance your lovely verse Nikko, Wish you all the best in the contest! Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 4/1/2012 12:03:00 PM opening it for you my little cutie! L & L Login to Reply

Dalila Agtani Date: 3/30/2012 12:18:00 AM Very lovely Hexaverse my dear Nikko. I feel like I'm reading a riddle and I'm tring to guess for the right answer! Hmmm, don't make me think Nikko! A winning piece! I have not been following any contest lately. Busy kasi. I am expecting a dear friend to come visit me in Seattle. Love Dalila Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/29/2012 10:06:00 PM Nikko, you did Superbly with this entry. MY, and you told me you just didn't know. Well, it's awesome. What less would I expect of you!!! I posted my silly one. Wish I knew how to do outstanding free verse!!! Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 3/29/2012 2:25:00 PM How sweet of your man to offer to kiss you every night so you know how much you are loved. Like the way you made "dust" from the mask. Very cool, Nikko. Wishing you success in Catie's contest. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 3/29/2012 10:02:00 AM ah a sweet and tender expression filled with compassion and empathy for another Nikko luv.. wishing u much success in Catie's contest.. and also good luck with your great new challenge to all poets here... gladly obliged luv.. sweet day as sweet as u ..puppy kisses and hugs.. Login to Reply

Joann Grisetti Date: 3/29/2012 8:20:00 AM Such a beautiful poem, I can feel that smile breaking. Login to Reply

John Rhinem Date: 3/29/2012 5:30:00 AM Smile ˜ Sooo Precious The Sweeetness Of It All * Dear Beautiful Nikko ˜ Love Always, John!:) ˜ Login to Reply

Date: 3/28/2012 4:32:00 PM Dear Nikko :) what a lovely write! so enjoyed reading this today just beautiful. I hope this does very well in Catie's contest. Thank you very much for your sweet comments. P.S I'm favin this one! Love Alexa Login to Reply

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