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White Feathered Fowl

white feathered fowl
slathered in black slimy crude
let their cry be ours . . .

For "OIL SPILLED OUT ANGER! /Slam Contest by SKAT*

Copyright © Connie Marcum Wong

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  1. Date: 3/29/2012 5:36:00 PM
    I'm not a fan but stopped to read this because I liked the title. It reminded me of a poem I wrote called Feather Beauty Bright. I understand the reasoning of wanting to conform to someone elses poetic form.

  1. Date: 12/25/2011 11:05:00 PM
    Connie, nice.. and tough, thank you for sharing.. May the magic of writing fill your days here on the soup. May all your dreams come true this holiday season. I hope you are enjoying the blessings that Christmas brings.. filling our hearts with hope and joy, just take care of yourself... once again enjoyed your poem,,always,..p.d.

  1. Date: 9/27/2011 12:30:00 AM
    I was reviewing this one and noticing how it never even scored.That's too bad. It deserved a win. glad you liked my sonnet on the church, Connie. I wrote it in my church library this past sunday!!

  1. Date: 9/6/2010 6:41:00 PM
    Connie you captured the essence of despair in your haiku, enjoyed it.. Dankie :) Wilma

  1. Date: 8/20/2010 1:18:00 AM
    Let their cries be indeed ours-- in 3 lines you've captured so much with this, Connie...hugs nikko :)

  1. Date: 8/13/2010 9:00:00 PM
    such a wonderful Haiku of a sad situation for sure,,wishing you all the best,,and thank You for visiting my words and leaving yours behind.,,Blessings..cecil

  1. Date: 8/13/2010 5:56:00 PM
    Very nicely written and completly concise. I got the passion without to many angry words. I also wanted to thank you for noticing that my poem "Stepping Outside" was a different form then what I put down. Thanks again for the observation.

  1. Date: 8/7/2010 8:16:00 PM
    slathered ---I like that. Very descriptive. Good work on a dirty subject. Charles

  1. Date: 8/5/2010 4:42:00 AM
    Beautifully done and to the point! Great write. Good luck in the contest. Dan C ps. Thanks for your comments on my work.

  1. Date: 8/4/2010 7:14:00 PM
    well said Connie!

  1. Date: 8/4/2010 5:20:00 PM
    I hope you win, Connie. YOu did great with this one!! Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 8/4/2010 1:02:00 PM
    What terrible scenes we see on our screens! Your haiku hits the mark! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 8/4/2010 10:08:00 AM
    Your poem gave me chills, literally goosebumps on my arms and legs. Very powerful haiku! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 8/4/2010 4:01:00 AM
    We all feel the same way..Good luck in the contest with this excellent short write that expresses so much..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

  1. Date: 8/3/2010 7:30:00 PM
    Saying its fixed on TV is a joke do u fix the loss and the devastation and the poor wildlife and sea creatures .. Connie your Haiku is brilliant to this travesty of greedy corporation and government... I have written a few myself on this subject so harsh to swallow... still so fresh in the mind... now the seafood is all tainted for restarant consumption as well.. luv.. wonderful friend.. with luv..

  1. Date: 8/3/2010 6:28:00 PM
    Very powerful thought expressed