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What Makes Me Tick--Contest

I'll dance on the brink in the blink of an eye Keeping feet on the ground, but my eyes to the sky ________________________________________________ Inspired by Seren's Contest: "What Makes You Tick"

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Skat A

Date: 9/20/2013 7:54:00 AM

congratulations Carrie.............SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/19/2013 10:13:00 AM

Carrie, , congratulations:) In Seren's "what makes you tick" contest... always~ Linda ........

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/18/2013 10:13:00 PM

for using two lines only, methinks you did the best!! Congrats.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/16/2013 6:28:00 PM

Sounds like fun! Congrats.

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/16/2013 2:40:00 PM

Beautifully put, Carrie! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Seren Roberts

Date: 9/15/2013 2:04:00 PM

Congratulations and thank you for entering my contest ....Seren

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/7/2013 11:46:00 PM

carrie is this all she wanted , just two lines and nothing more? I could not tell for sure from the contest page. Gosh, now I am wanting to try it! Hope I can do as great as YOUR great mind!

Carrie Richards
Date: 9/8/2013 8:27:00 AM

I was a little unsure....but Yes........I think only two lines?? Hope that's right!