Water Babies

The little children gathered and delighted in the sight
The sparkling of the river, like tumbling jewels dancing bright
The mermaids in the waterfall did sing ‘Come children one and all’
The children laughed and danced, for the sirens song they did fall.

To the hearts of the little ones stripping down to their underwear
No shame no false pride their innocent souls laid bare
They all jumped into the water; kicked and splashed it was such fun
Then the mermaids stole the laughter, from each and every one.

The mermaid with the green hair had enticed them all to play
Not one of the little children is now with us on this day
Just like the Pied Piper who called them with his lilting flute
They heard the voice of the mermaids, but little children are not astute.

Where were the parents who should watch over children at play?
Why was no one there when the mermaids enticed their prey?
The fairy of the Water World was shocked by what she saw
Her wrath she vents on the mermaids, the crows around did caw

The carrion picked the eyes out and made nests out of green hair
But still the children were gone; no one had taken heed of their prayer
The fairy of the water world shed tears but then thought maybe
Her tears touched the innocent souls, each transformed to a water baby

The water babies are now happy; they can play in water all day
But alas for their poor parents it is on their knees they pray.
There one can still hear the laughter the joy the fun
Also the sound of the waterfall as the terror begun.

© Mandy Tams & Harry J Horsman 2013
Collab with Mandy Tams..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 4/27/2013 1:34:00 PM
WoW, harry, you and Mandy did a right awesome job here, I'm wondering if this is based on a true story ? going to fav's . glad you liked my Lost Boys, I kept hesitating to post it cuz it was sad ;}
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Date: 4/11/2013 3:23:00 AM
Thanks harry for the inspiration on this one you pulled a blinder xx
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Harry Horsman
Date: 4/11/2013 6:28:00 AM
i could not have done it with out you, Golden Girl
Date: 4/10/2013 5:18:00 PM
Wow......beautiful yet so sad. This reminds me of an old song my dad would play on his guitar and sing.....about babes lost, and how sad it was....it brings back that melody to read your poem! Nicely done both of you!
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Date: 4/10/2013 10:41:00 AM
just with the tittle i knew this was going to be a good one, enjoyed your collaboration , very good minds... always p.d.
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Date: 4/10/2013 7:54:00 AM
A wonderful collaboration, Harry. You two work splendidly together.
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