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Waiting---Alliteration

Wistfully waiting and watching at the window, wishing and wondering. Will all this wanting be wasted? The evening embraces my empty arms, and eventually the essence of exquisite pain exudes from my eyes.. Our fabric of our future is faded , the feature of my fantasy was fabricated from a fevered fight for a fresh start.. Oh, be gone you beast, bewitch another...I, a bystander now, bequeath this boulevard of bones, to a better belle than I..
For the Alliteration contest

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Date: 4/9/2013 4:50:00 PM
I like this breath taking piece. Big Congrats Barbara~A.O
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Date: 4/5/2013 8:04:00 PM
Barbara, CONGRATULATIONS with your awesome alliteration- poem. Had fun reading all entries. take care~LINDA
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Date: 3/17/2013 11:40:00 AM
love this, my friend - sure winner here
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Date: 3/17/2013 8:01:00 AM
Nicely done Barbara. I love the tongue-tied verses. I warm Smiles Always, Connie
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Date: 3/17/2013 6:29:00 AM
"The evening embraces my empty arms, and eventually the essence of exquisite pain exudes from my eyes.." ... beautifully said. Excellent poem. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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Date: 3/15/2013 7:06:00 PM
I just finished tying my tongue in a knot........all thanks to you!! If I could talk, I would say "Great poem, Barbara!"
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