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Below is the poem entitled UPROOTING THE HEART VEINS which was written by poet nette onclaud. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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backside, front slide
whatever celtic profile
drips into the moon's pool
shawls twirl of mirrors unbidden
phrases and alphabets of waters wander
collapsing around the waist of marbles unturned

shelter me with a thousand
embraces from the moon's blankets
the wind torments me with granite whistles
when mother dusk wails for morsels of  biblical mercy
this decadent night crawls with exiled breaths. i breathe.

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  1. Date: 12/7/2012 6:58:00 AM
    A Super Congratulations on your placement in P.D....'s "Femme fatale" contest Nette. Love Carol

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 2:02:00 AM
    Many many congrats for this deep write and win.

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 3:59:00 AM
    Congrats on your HM nette love xx

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 10:33:00 AM
    My hearty congratulations on your awesome win my dear friend, Nette! love always, Leonora

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 4:18:00 AM
    Nette. :-) Congratulations with your heartfelt poem.. always~ PD

  1. Date: 3/2/2012 9:15:00 PM
    nette Congratulations on your poem featured this week...have a Nice one...pd

  1. Date: 2/28/2012 2:53:00 PM
    Congrats on the selection, nette. I will put this to sleep for a spell, then try again. Love, daver

  1. Date: 2/27/2012 5:21:00 PM
    Nette, This is an excellent piece. You are the real deal. Keep it coming. Jay

  1. Date: 2/27/2012 5:15:00 PM
    Congratulations on this delightful read, and on its being featured. - Chuck

  1. Date: 2/27/2012 3:42:00 PM
    Congrats Nette on the featured write. Vince

  1. Date: 2/27/2012 5:25:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Nette. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/1/2011 9:14:00 AM
    OK this goes to my fav's verse 2 is also a total stand alone. Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/30/2010 10:29:00 AM
    Hi Carol B, what a gracious gesture on your part to find some sliver of inspiration from this piece.. keep the pen rolling! thanks..:)

  1. Date: 9/30/2010 9:47:00 AM
    What an outstanding way to enjoy a day. I am so happy to be able to read the excellent poetry here at PoetrySoup today. Hope you are enjoying your day and finding much inspiration along the way Nette. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/30/2010 6:45:00 AM
    Yes, Caroline. you did resonate with me.. cheers and much joy to you!

  1. Date: 9/30/2010 6:44:00 AM
    Dr, Ram, i aprreciate your complimets with much thanks. the best to you!

  1. Date: 9/30/2010 6:42:00 AM
    Doris, thanks for making my day! more power to poetry and to you as well... light!

  1. Date: 9/29/2010 6:34:00 PM
    enjoyed reading this poem... could be read different ways...

  1. Date: 9/29/2010 1:12:00 PM
    Very sensitive and creative write. enjoyed it, nette

  1. Date: 9/29/2010 1:09:00 PM
    Beautiful use of imagery in this poem, Nette. There is a sense of desire as well as fear as "mother dusk wails." Very nice! Love, Carolyn