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Unaccomplished Promise

You offended my shape I don’t know if you meant it After a couple of days You smiled to me I looked away Your smile was so true, was so full of truth But still I looked away Today… You fought with me about something Concerning decorations And offended my traits and habits Then you, yourself developed a nasty habit The habit of looking at people But being blind to look at yourself I advised you Apply your advice to yourself, before saying it to me Then again, you whispered to your other sister And by that you’re disobeying prophet Mohammad You ignored me carelessly and taught your sister A bad habit Again and again How pathetic are you I thought… Then now, you come to me And give me a candy, I took it You spoke: I love you I ignored you and wished if you said:- You’d never do it again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/9/2011 12:41:00 AM
Nice write Mashallah:)
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