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Until times end I will calmly wait for you Forever thinking of things we used to do Only time can erase the memories so true Undaunted I consented to be your wife Fearful and hopeful for our new life Of which there was love and a little strife Unfortunately it’s over time has revealed Fundamental faults which couldn’t be healed Only left with loving memories concealed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/2/2013 6:25:00 PM
Very moving, congratulations.
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Date: 5/2/2013 2:23:00 PM
Way to do the contest and win big, Seren!! Nicely done. Congratulations.
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Date: 5/2/2013 10:57:00 AM
Quite a unique and creative twist.... Congrats, dear lady, on a well deserved win..... Jake
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Date: 5/2/2013 12:12:00 AM
Well done a win under your belt Sass, love it xx
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Date: 5/1/2013 6:59:00 PM
Seren, congratulations in Robert's contest. ~LINDA
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Date: 5/1/2013 5:16:00 PM
I'm sorry it ended this way. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/1/2013 4:59:00 PM
Such a sad tale of the UFO.........touching this is!
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Date: 5/1/2013 4:37:00 PM
Congrats on your winning entry Seren~A.O
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Date: 5/1/2013 3:56:00 PM
Lovely piece,Seren..Nice job..Congrats on your superb win in this contest...Kudos to you,dear friend...
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Date: 5/1/2013 3:24:00 PM
Thank you for entering this poem into the contest.
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Date: 4/11/2013 9:00:00 AM
Hi another sad and meaningful write Sass, should do well. xx
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Date: 4/9/2013 8:17:00 PM
Wonderful approach and. beautiful poem.....
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Seren Roberts
Date: 4/9/2013 8:19:00 PM
thanks Donna ....Seren
Date: 4/9/2013 7:26:00 PM
This is a very awesome write my friend! I am impressed with what you have done here Seren! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem this evening! What a lovely piece, Great Work!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 4/9/2013 8:07:00 PM
thank you Russell

Book: Shattered Sighs