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Typically Luke Poem 7 - A SEA VOYAGE

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Typically Luke Poem 7 - A SEA VOYAGE

Luke got a letter from school A sea voyage they had planned Luke was really excited As you may well understand On the day everyone had a wonderful time But someone was staying below deck Feeling really ill, should have taken a pill And was looking like a wreck Yes while others were enjoying the sites Luke was nowhere to be seen Still down below and wouldn't you know Turning a strange shade of green It should have been something to treasure But this was a school trip to hell I don't think in future he'll bother with trips Because I'm afraid Luke don't travel too well.

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  1. Date: 6/18/2013 12:27:00 AM
    I really liked that piece of poetry, Gary. I came from England to Oz by ship, and I never got seasick, but boy, I saw others suffer, was not a nice sight. Thank you for sharing Peter

  1. Date: 6/17/2013 11:34:00 AM
    - I get sea sick just by watching the waves on TV - It is awful, poor Luke. - No successful school trip. - Nice to read, but feel with you Luke. - Thanks to Grandpa Gary. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)