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Two Worlds Colliding

                                                  teenage rebellion --
                                                potent emotions soar
                                                 hormones run amuck

                                             parents know what's best
                                             safe, moral boundaries set --
                                                     let the war begin

7/29/12 by Kim Merryman
for Russell's "Two Worlds Colliding" contest.

Copyright © Kim Merryman

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  1. Date: 8/21/2012 9:53:00 AM
    love it :)

  1. Date: 8/18/2012 2:09:00 PM
    Great topic and truth spoken..((()))!!!Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 6:06:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Russell's "Two Worlds Colliding" contest Kim. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/15/2012 11:44:00 PM
    KIM, a warm congratulations in Russell Sivey's "Two Worlds Colliding " contest. had fun catching up with all the winners xox~ PD

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 7:53:00 PM
    I remember this one. It was a fun read. Especially love the last line. Belated congrats, Kim.

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 5:45:00 PM
    Two worlds colliding.........if this isn't it......nothing is!! I love your imagination....and every parent knows it has such truth!! So cute!! :)

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 7:31:00 AM
    Aint it the truth! congrats on your win. BG

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 11:51:00 PM
    Congrats Kim! You're right teenagers+parents=war. Lovely theme this!

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 2:38:00 AM
    Kim, congrats on your great win....David

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 5:40:00 PM
    Excellent write on teenagers,Kim. Congrats on your well deserved win...

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 2:20:00 PM
    Kim, I love the theme you chose ;) congratulations on your win.. Love Wilma

  1. Date: 8/2/2012 12:30:00 AM
    This is a great entry to the contest,Kim.Good luck!

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 10:24:00 PM
    Wow! This contest will be sooooo hard to judge! I just read Rhonda and David's entries...and let me tell, this one "will" be in the winners circle. Great work, Kim! My best wishes. Ruben.

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 3:05:00 PM
    oh, yes, there is gonna be a battle!!! what a unique take on the theme,Kim!

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 7:02:00 AM
    Love this one, Kim! Excellent senryu and so true! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 7/30/2012 12:31:00 AM
    yes the young think they are entitled, but they eventually know it all, being young is great, but it soon gets late, if you survive the brawl...

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 5:45:00 PM
    a different approach to the theme with a last line that clinches the whole piece, kim.. i still cannot comment on blog, TPS error 500... may i know what you mean by DREAMS in your contest?.. would this be about images we see while sleeping OR are these one's goals/ wisjes.. please clariy... thanks and best of luck over at russel's!..:) huggs! ;)

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 5:38:00 PM
    Oh so well said Kim-may the best team win : ()