Trembling...

It doesn't take a chill to make me shiver
    It can happen when I'm not prepared
        A thing of beauty can make me quiver
           Tiny goosebumps for me aren't rare
               Glorious music can do the trick
                    A lovely sunset can bring the tears
                         Most of all, what makes me tremble
                            Your slightest touch when you are here...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 2/8/2011 3:35:00 AM
Very passionate write!Goes to my Favs.
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Date: 9/5/2009 1:35:00 PM
good writing, a thing of beauty can... is a deep line nicely done.
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Date: 9/4/2009 7:47:00 AM
So full of emotion Carrie. I truly loved reading it. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/4/2009 12:51:00 AM
Loved it all, the shape, the size, the quality, the simplicity, the rhytm, and the form...Raul
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Date: 9/3/2009 11:36:00 PM
Carrie thanks for your welcome blog comments.Rgds Brian
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Date: 9/3/2009 7:16:00 PM
Carrie, I can really relate to this. I often get chills reading poetry or listening to music. I can tell you are a very passionate person. This is a lovely poem. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/3/2009 6:14:00 PM
your last line is warm and wonderful! Carrie!...jim
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Date: 9/3/2009 5:46:00 PM
Cool work yourself; clearly another hopeless Romantic like me! Just wanted to say that yours was the fastest comment I've ever received; I submitted that poem literally minutes ago. Glad you liked. Let me ask a favor of you, if I may: if you're any better at contacting the rest of the Soupers out there than I am, and you probably are; I've never been able to get my article feature here to work right - please tell the folks out there I said a Big Thanks for all the good comments they've made!
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