Treatise...

hellow fellow travelers,
i come to you from a far place in a small boat that i carved out of a tree from my fathers 
land that he planted before i was born-
so i am here
and with me is a bag of pearls
hard won from the depths of the sea --these i have counted and polished and they are mine
but to those who can recieve them i offer them freely. i have given many only to see them 
trampled by the proud and arragent. i am humble thowas a prince in my land.so know this i 
will trample the arragent and proud yet share my bread with those who are humble 
and they will call me friend as i will call them
so i invite you all-- let us be friends
o
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 9/10/2009 10:48:00 AM
Dear Orphani.....oooooo hello friend you know me from another planet as Seren I loved your first poem ;) LOL I am glad to know I have one friend here .. congrates on your wonderful poetry being featured this week my name here is Jayne Eggins :) ... Love Jayne x x
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Date: 9/10/2009 7:35:00 AM
This is a wonderful, awesome… poem,.; I love your style. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke
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Date: 9/8/2009 6:59:00 PM
Orphani - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, mj
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Date: 9/8/2009 2:24:00 PM
Orphani, congrats on being featured this week...Raul
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Date: 9/7/2009 3:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week>>James
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Date: 9/7/2009 7:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/7/2009 5:28:00 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. It is always delightful to read sensitive poetry with true feeling like this. Keep those words flowing. Big Smile, Dane Ann
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Date: 8/20/2009 9:47:00 PM
your poem is very meaningful and i like this beautiful creation a lot.well done.keep writing.thanks for your precious comment on my poem.let us be friends...............love,renu
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Date: 8/19/2009 7:01:00 AM
Nice poem, welcome to the soup!
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Date: 8/19/2009 6:28:00 AM
What a beautiful heartfelt poem Orphani. I can see you are going to be quite an asset to out PoetrySoup family. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/19/2009 5:19:00 AM
Love the deep meaning of this elegant piece. Keep writing. Sara
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