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Above the Moon

A poem is born right here at home No need to fly where I'm alone I've often wished for wings that fly To take a magic carpet ride To places deep where phrases hide So rich with wisdom, and insights known Above the moon, where stars are keeping Amazing words that form a poem If closing eyes and knowing this The wonder of poetic bliss Are beneath my feet, beneath my stare A poem resides most anywhere The voice inside my head must share My life, my friends, my family Within my reach, are memories Where lies a wealth, a poem or verse To touch a few with heartfelt words A poem unfolds ...one tiny rose It starts new life, so tightly closed But given life, it opens wide And takes me on a carpet ride I pray for words that will not hide To take you too..........upon this ride Above the moon, beyond the stars To land upon a lonely heart ______________________________

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/25/2013 7:15:00 PM
Carrie' congratulations with your sweet win 'take care~SKAT
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Date: 2/20/2013 1:45:00 AM
Many Congratulations on your win Carrie xx
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Date: 2/19/2013 6:39:00 PM
A lot of folks wrote about writing! Nice one and thanks so much for the kind comments you left today, I keep tweaking that poem. Congrad's Light & Love Always
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Date: 2/19/2013 5:20:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your win. Connie
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Date: 2/19/2013 4:25:00 PM
Carrie, love your winning poem in Michael's "boomerang contest" always & forever :-) LINDA
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Date: 1/29/2013 9:09:00 PM
How can I begin to even say that this comes from heaven. Not many poems here impress me but when I see the pure gold that can come from a poets heart.or the gift of a wondering muse. I stop and pay my duely respect. Because that is a muse I can use. Great work.JOHN HENRY LOVING III
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Date: 1/29/2013 9:11:00 PM
P.s. one carpet ride is enough. You'll come up with something.
Date: 1/29/2013 12:43:00 PM
Wow, Nicely done poet. I really enjoy reading this kind of poetry. Can you read my poem thanks
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Date: 1/29/2013 12:24:00 PM
The magi of writing (and reading) is that it takes you wherever you want to go. Carrie, I have missed your work so much. Tried to get your address for a Christmas card, but failed. As I tell everyone who asks, you are one of the finest writers on the Soup. Bless you, Carolyn
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Date: 1/29/2013 10:40:00 AM
Beautiful poem Carrie, love Elizabeth
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Date: 1/29/2013 10:34:00 AM
a wonderful joyus poem Carrie, just love this....
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Date: 1/28/2013 10:15:00 PM
An excellent write for the contest, Carrie, a pleasure to read!! Jag
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Date: 1/28/2013 7:14:00 PM
Carrie you did fantastic job, love every word, great poem and yes, best winning wishes.....
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Date: 1/28/2013 10:31:00 AM
Carrie thanks for the 'carpet ride'...how wonderful!! I had to read it again...:) big hugs, love ya, deb oh and best winning wishes for you in the contest, too...!!
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Date: 1/28/2013 9:06:00 AM
I loved this poem Carrie. It it the first I've read of yours. I would love to write good poetry like this one day. I look forward to reading more. Love Beauty28 (Pam)
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Date: 1/28/2013 9:00:00 AM
An amazing poem from you Carrie.Love this.Best wishes to you.
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Date: 1/28/2013 6:02:00 AM
Wonderful verse Carrie, love Elizabeth
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Date: 1/27/2013 10:58:00 PM
This poem filled me with joy Carrie. I loved it and it is sure to place in Michael's contest. I couldn't think of anything to write. XXXOOO
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Date: 1/27/2013 8:28:00 PM
lovely concept and wonderful imagery..enjoyed your write this morning Carrie
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