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Below is the poem entitled TO WHISPER MILDLY---LGT which was written by poet nette onclaud. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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In moments when the twilight sparks
To gently flare as dark embarks,
Tender comes eve swinging a hum
While air-brushed clouds, on flight, succumb.

Yet, through the lull of sky, I hear
Their voices billow quite unclear
Whispering mildly, still I know
Those refrains from seasons ago.

Somehow, before the call of morn
When foggy mist glides on hawthorns,
And daybreak hails a new sunset
I trace past journeys now at rest.
Amidst the quiver of my dreams,
Beloved voices float midstream
On to pathways that bless each name;
Marked deeply in my soul, aflame.

Andrea Dietrich's Let's Get Technical Contest
~new poem~

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  1. Date: 8/18/2014 7:16:00 AM
    This is a great write... I see that it won in a contest too.. Congrats my friend!!!

  1. Date: 7/29/2014 2:12:00 PM
    Nette, Congratulations, in Andrea's "Let's Get Technical contest:)" Loving life's how it goes.... LINDA

  1. Date: 7/28/2014 7:38:00 AM
    Wonderful imagery Nette,, pic comes alive,, congrats on huge win!

  1. Date: 7/28/2014 6:03:00 AM
    I'm not surprised to see this one with a high placement, nette, as it is very lovely and full of the imagery that andrea likes - congrats on your win! :)

  1. Date: 7/27/2014 6:59:00 PM
    So beautiful, Nette. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 7/27/2014 5:16:00 PM
    Back with big congrats on a great win, sweet Nette.. Hugs.. Arlene

  1. Date: 7/27/2014 3:36:00 PM

  1. Date: 7/27/2014 12:25:00 PM
    For the imagery and the near perfection of your writing technique, this one gets a high placement in my contest, Nette. That line about hawthorns wowed me. Last verse as well. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 7/27/2014 12:02:00 PM
    Beatiful words that whisper and flow. Great win, Nette

  1. Date: 7/22/2014 8:09:00 AM
    Nothing so beautiful as words penned from a sweet soul... Hugs, dear Nette.. Arlene

  1. Date: 7/21/2014 6:12:00 AM
    It may be a whisper, but this poem does speak volumes, nette! I like the beautiful imagery you have laced here-- and the flow is melodic. Beautiful write! And I sure am glad you are ok, and safe! I was wondering about you, and hoping walang nasira sa inyo, sa amin, and daming punong nabali at natumba :(... Hopefully back to normal na sa inyo lahat, and ingat ka lagi!

  1. Date: 7/20/2014 11:27:00 PM
    Dear Nette: Someone once said: "Words can make magic." You know what? Your wordplay makes more than magic! In my view, you are the 'Poet Laurette' of this realm called PoetrySoup dot-com. Any objections, anyone? Guess not then. Keep waving your magic wand (Pen), dearest poet laurette of the Soup! All the best then, Leon.

  1. Date: 7/20/2014 10:29:00 PM
    Very sweet work here. A tinge of mysticism in couplet form. Peace &Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 7/20/2014 8:44:00 PM
    I hear you whisper mildly Nette, and I love your soft refrain, it's as gentle as sweet rain, big bear hugs for you, xxx

  1. Date: 7/20/2014 7:58:00 PM
    Oh wow, reminiscing with angel wings.. Spell bound by every word, every thought, every memory. Perfection! One of your best ever...

  1. Date: 7/20/2014 4:37:00 PM
    Beautiful Nette, just beautiful....peter

  1. Date: 7/20/2014 1:29:00 PM
    Nette, I especially liked the second half of this one. Love the line about the hawthorns. They have such a romantic imagery for me.

  1. Date: 7/20/2014 12:10:00 PM
    Absolutely beautiful poetry crying for publishing! 7 my best, chuck

  1. Date: 7/20/2014 10:59:00 AM
    So peaceful and flowing nette...hugs Tim

  1. Date: 7/20/2014 9:07:00 AM
    Beautiful write Nette...I enjoyed the read...