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Thought I Died and Went To -

Next!...Can I help you? Unemployed, huh? Humm, let's see Gotta check my records here... Nope! No openings Directions?... Not a problem See that sign that says - YOU'RE TOAST? ***Re-titled and edited version

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/19/2013 9:41:00 PM

Hola, Tim,, who is off in dream land.... sad, sad,,, hope the toast is a good luck one... always...pd

Donna Jones

Date: 3/19/2013 12:49:00 PM

Too sad too real too close to home for too many...good write Tim

Seren Roberts

Date: 3/19/2013 7:13:00 AM

if your the toast who is the marmalade??? Just trying to lighten it...Seren

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/19/2013 2:26:00 AM

:( A sad write, my dear! If I were you....I'd say...I'm Toast? Bring out the jam! Let's have a party! I know...lame, but don't know what else to say...Good write, on a tough subject.