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Thought I Died and Went To -

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Thought I Died and Went To -

Next!...Can I help you?
Unemployed, huh? Humm, let's see
Gotta check my records here...
Nope! No openings
Directions?... Not a problem
See that sign that says - YOU'RE TOAST?

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  1. Date: 4/7/2013 6:31:00 PM
    The way you engineer those poems dear, I'm sure you can get an engineering job, Common Ace, let's see that cute smile of yours, Yes, I can imagine it, now have yourself a splendid evening Tim, Babe xxx

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 9:41:00 PM
    Hola, Tim,, who is off in dream land.... sad, sad,,, hope the toast is a good luck one... always...pd

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 12:49:00 PM
    Too sad too real too close to home for too many...good write Tim

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 7:13:00 AM
    if your the toast who is the marmalade??? Just trying to lighten it...Seren

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 2:26:00 AM
    :( A sad write, my dear! If I were you....I'd say...I'm Toast? Bring out the jam! Let's have a party! I know...lame, but don't know what else to say...Good write, on a tough subject.