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The Vanished Goodbye

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The Vanished Goodbye

Ba-Bump Ba-Bump
Heart_ worn on sleeve
Ba-Bump Ba-Bump
For the whole world to see
Ba-Bump Ba-Bump
That you are my babe
Ba-Bump Ba-Bump
Ba-Bump Ba-Bump

...But my heart beat stopped 
that very day you walked away 

You didn't say a word
No goodbye 

Now all that sits in my mind
Is you

You told me you loved me
You told me I was your babe
and that I was your heart

I told you I had you as number one 
You held the first spot in my heart
I loved you the most

But you left 
And didn't say a word

Was it your heart that would break 
with a single goodbye 

Or was it my heart to get crushed all along 

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  1. Date: 6/22/2011 6:20:00 PM
    Sorry its called "Kind Feelings".

  1. Date: 6/22/2011 6:18:00 PM
    Sad write my poet friend. I have many writes like this but later wrote 2 you may like "A smile kept". "Kind Words". Hope your well and thank you for the comment. Michael

  1. Date: 6/15/2011 10:39:00 AM
    Very sentimental. Hearts do mend in time. Wishing you love to last a lifetime, until then remember you are a gold mine. Love and Light, Viena