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The update on Why - fifth poem posted here - contest

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The update on Why - fifth poem posted here - contest

My fifth poem posted I asked why 
Now I can answer one or two
No he didn't wait for me
Now I am busy remembering "who."

This heart of mine is still beating
Pain is of the human kind
Operation was successful
Need's another heart entwined

My road is still a lonely one
Hope for sure is out there
My "why's" are being slowly answered
Shows you life can be fair

Patience is all thats needed
That and believing in oneself
Prayers are indeed heeded
Please God don't leave me on the shelf


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  1. Date: 7/7/2013 2:47:00 PM
    A very lovely write Seren, and congratulations on your win Peter

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 10:13:00 AM
    SEREN -CONGRATULATIONS!!! With your awesome winning write, in the 5th poem theme contest. always & forever * Linda

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 5:58:00 PM
    Seren, I really like your update to the 5th poem "Why". I feel the positive and encouraging steps you have taken since then. Congrats on the win :)

  1. Date: 7/5/2013 2:43:00 PM
    Congrats on your win. Nicely expressed. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 7/4/2013 9:18:00 AM
    Congratulations on clearing that up. I hope to never see you languishing away on some shelf.... We need you too much. ....Jake

  1. Date: 7/3/2013 11:31:00 PM
    SEREN, Congratulations, <3:-) A wonderful 5th poem. thank you for choosing my contest........ ............. LOVE * SKAT

  1. Date: 6/30/2013 7:24:00 PM
    This is a wonderfully inquisitive write my friend! I am delighted to have read this splendid poem this evening, What an awesome piece, Great work!!