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The Update On Why - Fifth Poem Posted Here - Contest

My fifth poem posted I asked why Now I can answer one or two No he didn't wait for me Now I am busy remembering "who." This heart of mine is still beating Pain is of the human kind Operation was successful Need's another heart entwined My road is still a lonely one Hope for sure is out there My "why's" are being slowly answered Shows you life can be fair Patience is all thats needed That and believing in oneself Prayers are indeed heeded Please God don't leave me on the shelf

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/7/2013 10:13:00 AM

SEREN -CONGRATULATIONS!!! With your awesome winning write, in the 5th poem theme contest. always & forever * Linda

Karen Anglesey

Date: 7/6/2013 5:58:00 PM

Seren, I really like your update to the 5th poem "Why". I feel the positive and encouraging steps you have taken since then. Congrats on the win :)

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 7/5/2013 2:43:00 PM

Congrats on your win. Nicely expressed. Warm Smiles, Connie

John Posey

Date: 7/4/2013 9:18:00 AM

Congratulations on clearing that up. I hope to never see you languishing away on some shelf.... We need you too much. ....Jake

Skat A

Date: 7/3/2013 11:31:00 PM

SEREN, Congratulations, <3:-) A wonderful 5th poem. thank you for choosing my contest........ ............. LOVE * SKAT

Russell Sivey

Date: 6/30/2013 7:24:00 PM

This is a wonderfully inquisitive write my friend! I am delighted to have read this splendid poem this evening, What an awesome piece, Great work!!