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The Trip. Finished

All the screaming, yelling, fighting, pushing, and shoving has got us all complaining, what a beautiful trip. Someone get me out of this van! I'm so tierd of all of you. Yeah dad you said make it a good trip. Mom you said not to argue. But what did we do? Oh yes.... All the screaming, yelling, pushing, shoveing has got us all complaining, what a beautiful trip. What a beautiful trip we had.

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Date: 2/1/2012 11:22:00 AM
I have truly enjoyed reading your poetry you have posted here at PoetrySoup. You are a very special poet and I wish you the best in your life and with your poetry. Two thumbs up to you Emily. Love and best wishes always, Carol
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Date: 6/2/2009 12:48:00 PM
Good poem. Something about that title just insists on flipping the script. Thanks.
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Date: 5/24/2009 8:20:00 PM
hahaha was it really that bad
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