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Emily's Birthday Tea Party

The old folks at the home, and none at all of them too fleet of foot in their last years, came shuffling, some with walkers, down the hall, including those with aids pressed in their ears. Then one (whose punctured lung had not healed well) was wheeled in; she had just turned ninety-three! They'd all come (when the nurse had rung the bell), for what was now to be revealed: a "Tea!" The English lady wheeled in never knew what they were planning as she lay in bed. They'd stamped the name of "Emily" onto The sparkling crown which now lay on her head. With cake crumbs on her chin, in pure delight, She sipped the tea they'd sweetened up just right! April 28, 2010

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Date: 8/11/2020 9:07:00 AM
This is a delightful and heartwarming tale of an English gentlewoman celebrating her birthday with a surprise tea. How happy this must have made her!
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Date: 2/11/2016 10:18:00 PM
Andrea, Congrats in Nayda's "Birthday Party win." Love LINDA
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Date: 2/11/2016 9:17:00 AM
Nicely done, Andrea. A touching account, and such a smooth read. And I love your rhymes.
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Date: 2/11/2016 4:38:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Andrea!
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Date: 2/11/2016 3:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 2/10/2016 10:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning write, Andrea! Wonderful :)
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Date: 2/10/2016 8:32:00 PM
Congratulations, Andrea, on your placement in the contest. I wish I could live to 93. I think.
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Date: 2/10/2016 6:25:00 PM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Andrea
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Date: 2/10/2016 6:22:00 PM
loved your humour in this write - made me think of the folks at mum's care home! congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/10/2016 6:21:00 PM
Wonderful write Andrea..Congrats on your win
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Date: 2/10/2016 6:10:00 PM
Precious Sonnet, Andrea. Congratulations on your placement! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/10/2016 5:31:00 PM
A sweet story..congrats dear. BG
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Date: 7/2/2014 5:07:00 PM
This is a very sweet sonnet, Andrea. I have entertained at old folks homes before and I could picture every line. Very good use of the sonnets restrictions. I enjoyed it... Robert.
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Date: 1/29/2014 10:59:00 PM
Andrea what a cute and charming write. Full of sweetness and humor. One lump or two in your tea. LOL Nice job Thanks for the great comment on my One More Try poem.
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Date: 2/5/2011 10:21:00 AM
Yes Love it !This tea party of elderly women--kash
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Date: 4/29/2010 10:57:00 PM
Very sweet image of this elderly woman, Andrea. My father was 93 when he died last year, but thankfully he hadn't suffered the pain of a punctured lung. I have a soft spot for seniors. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/29/2010 10:12:00 PM
DIS IS CUTE. N UR REALLY 54, DANG U LOOK YOUNG. bUfFy
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Date: 4/29/2010 8:47:00 PM
Very cute and warm little tail of this caregiving tea party, Andrea. Very inspiring. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 4/29/2010 4:29:00 PM
Neat write that was great in rhyme and rhythm...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 4/29/2010 3:05:00 PM
Hard to tell what fantasies go through the young mind these days. Romance doesn't seem to be something mystic. Too much reality I suppose. Does the "Smoke get in their eyes?" Love, Dave
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Date: 4/29/2010 1:43:00 PM
very nice always a plasure to read your poetry well done have a great day faleshia
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Date: 4/29/2010 12:33:00 PM
thats really sweet Andrea.this would be like my great grandparents.she is quite old, and a queen she is(: i'd help create a party that looks like their time, and so they can feel young again. -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 4/29/2010 12:27:00 PM
Fabulous Sonnet! Really beautiful. I could just see the lady with the cake crumbs on her chin and sipping her tea. This was a joy to read.
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Date: 4/29/2010 8:38:00 AM
Such a poignant view into old age and their environment as well.. a beautiful Sonnet from the "Queen" herself.. a few seconds to say "hi"..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/29/2010 8:03:00 AM
A charming poem, you have sweetened my morning coffee just as they sweetened her tea....!! Loved this, Andrea!
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