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The Sapphire Beauty

The sapphire eyed beauty like a wonder of the world She has my heart in the palm of her hand I get lost staring in to another world in her eyes she lights up the empty room in my chest shes one of a kind and always on my mind her beauty is so strong she could tame a lion my heart is like a drum solo when shes next to me she is grater then any gem for a gem doesn't have the power of love The blue eyed Angel is worth more then a sapphire is worth more then the world she worth more than everything as her beauty is priceless

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/30/2010 9:30:00 AM
Hi. Another great piece. Sorry about Nevada. Bloody Internet can be a pain sometimes. Waterford here. Go on the Lilywhites. Cheers , Eamon
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Date: 10/1/2010 7:41:00 AM
Sounds like a great person, blessings in your endeavors. Welcome to the soup. Drop by me anytime, you are welcome as my friend.
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Date: 9/29/2010 11:49:00 AM
Beautiful poem
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Date: 9/29/2010 9:41:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Elton. Wishing you the best in your writing Mikeendeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/29/2010 1:50:00 AM
your expressive use of phrasing is lovely..got a little lost in the end but strong images come from this
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Date: 9/28/2010 4:53:00 PM
I like those sapphire eyes... sounds gorgeous!
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Date: 9/28/2010 3:51:00 PM
Great romantic and expressive write...Enjoyed reading your work..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Welcome to soup...Sara
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Date: 9/28/2010 3:28:00 PM
Hi Elton. I can see your new to soup or else have'nt submitted for a while as I see you're a member and fav poet.Well I like this especially some of your imagery and I would like to read more poems. Thanks for your comments.I believe I have Celtish blood in me according to my maiden name(McC...) And somehow feel an infinity with anything Irish more so than Scottish but I don't know my roots. Till next time Luv June(to my soup friends)
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Date: 9/28/2010 3:02:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed this creative write of yours tonight Elton.. check out the contest scene to enter and good luck with luv..
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