Home » Poems » Elaine George » The Rhythm of the Falls

The Rhythm of the Falls

.                                              Streams of liquid dreams
                                            fall in shades of blue on green
                                                         to serenity


                                                 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~



                                             Written:  October 9, 2009

                                    Inspired by:  Raul Moreno’s Haiku contest 
                                    and the Photo provided for the contest
                                    Awarded:  2nd Place

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Audrey Haick

Date: 11/5/2009 9:38:00 PM

Congratulations once more Elaine!! Peace and love, Audrey

Brandee Augustus

Date: 10/27/2009 12:49:00 PM

Wow! This contest really got out some great creativity! I really love this drinkable haikus. This is lovely! Congratulations!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 10/23/2009 4:27:00 AM

Congratulations, Elaine, on placing Raul’s picture inspired contest with this wonderful haiku. It amazed me at how many great and different haiku were inspired by such a lovely photograph. Creativity shines. Smiles, DAS-J

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 10/22/2009 10:18:00 AM

Dear Lady Elaine, LOVE THIS great Haiku...HG SOUP MAIL CALL

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 10/22/2009 9:07:00 AM

Dear Lady Elaine, Congratulations on YOUR Well deserved Second Place Win in Raul's Contest YOUR Awesome talent shines as a beacon for the novice such as myself You inspire my growth LOVE to YOU and YOURS ALWAYS and FOREVER...HG

Sue Mason

Date: 10/19/2009 5:04:00 PM

Good luck in the contest, Elaine!

Marty Owens

Date: 10/19/2009 9:05:00 AM

This is beautiful..I wouldn't have wanted to judge this contest!! Congratulations...Marty

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/19/2009 7:57:00 AM

This is beautiful! I love your imagery! Congrats on your 2nd place win Lainie :) Thanks as well for your comments :)

Audrey Haick

Date: 10/18/2009 9:20:00 PM

Congratulations Elaine!! Beautiful imagery!! Peace, Audrey

Adell Foster

Date: 10/18/2009 8:19:00 PM

Congrats on your well deserved win Lanie, this is a very lovely work indeed :-) God Bless, always, Adell

Ismael Nieves

Date: 10/18/2009 7:48:00 PM

CONGRATS! on your success. It is a very colorful haiku.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/17/2009 4:40:00 PM

Congratulations, Lainie! Great work! Love, Carolyn

Sean Kelly

Date: 10/17/2009 4:05:00 AM

Told you , it was a winner !! . Congrats ...

Brian Strand

Date: 10/17/2009 2:18:00 AM

Congrats on your success in the contest Elaine.Rgds Brian

Donna Golden

Date: 10/16/2009 10:06:00 PM

Gorgeous imagery, masterful phrasing. Congrats on your well-deserved win, Lanie! Hugs, Donna

Canny Amah

Date: 10/16/2009 7:53:00 PM

A million cheers on your win in the Rhythm of the Falls contest … Congrats!!! Take a pat on your back … Canny.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/16/2009 7:27:00 PM

nicely written, congrats on the win!!

Robin L. Gass

Date: 10/16/2009 4:41:00 PM

Congratulations on your WIN with this beautiful Haiku in Rauls contest! Love, Robin

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/16/2009 4:24:00 PM

Excellent description and well deserving this 2nd place win in Raul's contest!! Thank you for sharing for this beautiful poem! Congratulations, Elaine!! Love, Carrie