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The Rhythm of the Falls

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The Rhythm of the Falls

.                                              Streams of liquid dreams
                                            fall in shades of blue on green
                                                         to serenity


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                                             Written:  October 9, 2009

                                    Inspired by:  Raul Moreno’s Haiku contest 
                                    and the Photo provided for the contest
                                    Awarded:  2nd Place

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  1. Date: 11/5/2009 9:38:00 PM
    Congratulations once more Elaine!! Peace and love, Audrey

  1. Date: 10/27/2009 12:49:00 PM
    Wow! This contest really got out some great creativity! I really love this drinkable haikus. This is lovely! Congratulations!

  1. Date: 10/23/2009 4:27:00 AM
    Congratulations, Elaine, on placing Raul’s picture inspired contest with this wonderful haiku. It amazed me at how many great and different haiku were inspired by such a lovely photograph. Creativity shines. Smiles, DAS-J

  1. Date: 10/22/2009 10:18:00 AM
    Dear Lady Elaine, LOVE THIS great Haiku...HG SOUP MAIL CALL

  1. Date: 10/22/2009 9:07:00 AM
    Dear Lady Elaine, Congratulations on YOUR Well deserved Second Place Win in Raul's Contest YOUR Awesome talent shines as a beacon for the novice such as myself You inspire my growth LOVE to YOU and YOURS ALWAYS and FOREVER...HG

  1. Date: 10/19/2009 5:04:00 PM
    Good luck in the contest, Elaine!

  1. Date: 10/19/2009 9:05:00 AM
    This is beautiful..I wouldn't have wanted to judge this contest!! Congratulations...Marty

  1. Date: 10/19/2009 7:57:00 AM
    This is beautiful! I love your imagery! Congrats on your 2nd place win Lainie :) Thanks as well for your comments :)

  1. Date: 10/18/2009 9:20:00 PM
    Congratulations Elaine!! Beautiful imagery!! Peace, Audrey

  1. Date: 10/18/2009 8:19:00 PM
    Congrats on your well deserved win Lanie, this is a very lovely work indeed :-) God Bless, always, Adell

  1. Date: 10/18/2009 7:48:00 PM
    CONGRATS! on your success. It is a very colorful haiku.

  1. Date: 10/17/2009 4:40:00 PM
    Congratulations, Lainie! Great work! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 10/17/2009 4:05:00 AM
    Told you , it was a winner !! . Congrats ...

  1. Date: 10/17/2009 2:18:00 AM
    Congrats on your success in the contest Elaine.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 10/16/2009 10:06:00 PM
    Gorgeous imagery, masterful phrasing. Congrats on your well-deserved win, Lanie! Hugs, Donna

  1. Date: 10/16/2009 10:01:00 PM
    A masterpiece and a successful winner! Congratulations! Ruben.

  1. Date: 10/16/2009 7:53:00 PM
    A million cheers on your win in the Rhythm of the Falls contest … Congrats!!! Take a pat on your back … Canny.

  1. Date: 10/16/2009 7:27:00 PM
    nicely written, congrats on the win!!

  1. Date: 10/16/2009 4:41:00 PM
    Congratulations on your WIN with this beautiful Haiku in Rauls contest! Love, Robin

  1. Date: 10/16/2009 4:24:00 PM
    Excellent description and well deserving this 2nd place win in Raul's contest!! Thank you for sharing for this beautiful poem! Congratulations, Elaine!! Love, Carrie

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