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The Return of Heart From Darkness

there was a moment I felt our hearts brush, there was within time a thought, mine you would crush those inhumane moments within the walls of your world, stripped me of feeling and all my emotions unfurled threads of memory drift through my mind, I pick up the ends to try to make them align I have flashes of joy that pinpricked our life, but the strongest in visions are the ones staged of strife I remember all the love you stripped from my soul, I remember all the nights wishing I was once again whole these agonies I’ve bled on my wedding dress, I’ve erased, the seeing of you ripping my flesh so these words aren’t wrought within the pain of despair, for I choose to remember the very best we shared there let the Road to Perdition that I traveled with you, carry the heartache and pain so we can say this adieu the thought I now cradle to the end of my lines, is of laughing and smiling in the heart of springtime your power has fallen and can’t hurt me again as I sit here, wonder, was the beginning worth the end

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/1/2010 2:25:00 PM
Hi Jayne I loved this it is so full of emotion.so powerful,those words'ripping my flesh'.so much conveyed in just three words.And yet trying to cling onto soft sweet memories among the sad ones.Really beautiful ,thank you for the pleasure you gave me by sharing it. I'd also like to thank you for your kind comments on my poem.Luv(Sylvia)
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Date: 9/29/2010 8:53:00 AM
JAYNE, CoNGRATULATIoNS oN HAVING YoUR PoEM FEATURED THIS WEEK*luv~SKAT
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Date: 9/27/2010 5:09:00 PM
lovely write Jayne, congrats on having your poem featured on the soup, it was a pleasure reading today...P.D.
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Date: 9/27/2010 9:43:00 AM
This piece was amazing, I felt every line, every word. The second and fourth stanza are my favorites, they were simply powerful and so wonderfully penned! Painful, and yet, beautiful. Congratulation on your feature this week, it is well earned. One for my Faves. Take care --Madison
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Date: 9/27/2010 9:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week. Love and best wishes....Ravindra....Jayne Eggins
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Date: 9/27/2010 6:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Jayne. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/25/2010 6:32:00 AM
enjoyed reading your writes!
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Date: 9/25/2010 1:07:00 AM
In your sketch of this beautiful Poem, the sings of pain and tears are splashing out everywhere, indicating the smiles and wounds left by its creator. Great reflections of touching emotions. And many thanks for your precious comments on Ground of Formless Realities. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra...Jayne Eggins
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Date: 9/24/2010 5:23:00 AM
When a breakup occurs, the lingering pain can make us wonder if everything we put into the relationship was worth the effort. However, I do believe creating precious memories will provide some comfort after the hurt passes. Excellent poem, Jayne. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/24/2010 3:41:00 AM
Very creative and passionate write on the return of the heart,,,Jayne
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