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The Red Rose Of Eternal Love - Part 2

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The Red Rose Of Eternal Love - Part 2

Crimson stains
Of my remains
Ashes of past desires
Are given unto you
Weep not
For finally I shall do you some good
Scatter me in the garden
And as life begins anew
And seasons change to spring
The heavens may water the gardens
My ashes shall make the future bloom
And so when you see the perfect red rose
Crucify me once more
Pluck this flower
And breathe the fragrance of my love
I am the red rose of eternity

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  1. Date: 9/16/2013 6:30:00 AM
    A really great write Athur. This is just the type of romance I would go for if I was to pen a poem this good. Well done, a 7 from me also.

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 7:39:00 PM
    " rose of eternity" what a powerful words,thank you for sharing your poetry ,Ivy

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 6:03:00 PM
    It's very sweet and sets off a soft picutre with alot of warmth to it even though it is a little sad. Thank you for your comments on my work also.

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 7:45:00 AM
    Spectacular imagery! A sad tale of love brilliantly expressed. 7 it would be higher if the scale went further.

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 12:02:00 AM
    So beautiful, the whole two parts, Arthur! Emotion is so raw. I enjoyed it :).