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The Poem In the Mind-2

The poem in the mind There is only enough space in my mind For just a poem and there you I find Can’t think of another thing My mind singing what you sing To all else except you I’m rather blind. I know you are an involved mom of six And what toll it takes bringing up those chicks On your spirit and body Your life was never gaudy But the essence of such a gracious mix. Adorable are your traits which are rare Attributes, six, are your children so fair They are love, care and beauty Passion, power and frailty Here’s the perfect woman beyond compare. @ 23 feb 13 S.Jagathsimhan Nair Entry for PD's contest on 5 mar 13

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Date: 10/24/2014 11:21:00 AM
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful! Pandita
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Date: 3/13/2013 8:50:00 PM
This was very nice and I enjoyed it very much. Congratulations on your win. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 3/7/2013 4:17:00 PM
Congrats, Jag. Excellent piece. Well done. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 3/6/2013 9:38:00 PM
JAG, ;-) congratulations with your awesome win, in my contest. always~ LINDA
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Date: 2/24/2013 12:23:00 AM
this is so sweet. It sounds like you are doing a tribute for your wife here!! Do you really have six children?? When you said "your" six children , it sounds as if the children do not belong to you, only to her. So I was curious!!
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Date: 2/23/2013 8:55:00 AM
You always have enjoyable poems to share, Jag. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/23/2013 3:01:00 AM
thanks for sharing that greatly flow of emotion.
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Date: 2/23/2013 2:51:00 AM
What beautiful words of loving someone. Very nice read.
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