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The path taken ...

The path taken ...
                           Authored by Chuck Keys

One day I'll go for a walk and forget to come home
and lose myself among the trees and the gnomes.

I'll be dressed in my walking shorts, shoes and socks
ready to face the unknown world and all of its locks

alone and free, seasoned with age beyond my years afloat
unbridled from people and places and ready to emote.

The path will go straight and sideways, straight and backways
and bend to the left to secret hide-a-ways.

I'll be dressed in my walking shorts, shoes and socks
ready to face the unknown world and all of its locks

Lose myself I will, on purpose with forethought and glee
because that is what makes me, me.

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  1. Date: 7/26/2010 5:33:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Chuck. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/25/2010 12:27:00 PM
    Delightful...and dont forget , your poetry makes Congrats on being featured. BG

  1. Date: 7/25/2010 8:27:00 AM
    Congrats Chuck on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a nice one to share with us all.. with luv..

  1. Date: 6/8/2010 7:43:00 PM
    hey,just wanted to say thanks for the comment and i enjoy reading this.i've always thought of doing this one day. -Jaz

  1. Date: 5/19/2010 12:39:00 PM
    hello there :) just wanted to say thank you for your lovely comment and i'm enjoying reading your work! -suzanne

  1. Date: 5/18/2010 2:10:00 PM
    this can be intresting nice plans:)

  1. Date: 4/27/2010 10:24:00 AM
    this fits in the couplet rhyme category. Very nice. Thanks for your comments today.

  1. Date: 4/21/2010 3:07:00 PM
    You have me smiling with this one. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen

  1. Date: 4/21/2010 9:19:00 AM
    Chuck, enjoyed--don't forget the coat--you might get cold.

  1. Date: 4/21/2010 8:48:00 AM
    Hi Chuck, thank you for commenting on my poem...I just finished reading you work so far..very nice. and welcome to the soup. I got a big kick out of the chicken poem..where are you from? BG