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The Park -- Part Two

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Below is the poem entitled The Park -- Part Two which was written by poet Leo Larry Amadore. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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The Park -- Part Two

(Please read The Park -- Part One first ...
This is a continuation from Part One, due to space limitations)

Yes, kids at play are bold and wise
with flashing smiles and knowing eyes.
Children bore easily with grown up prattle;
their thoughts turn to cake and to toys that rattle.
They know that Belles and Bills tell lies.
Time is but a birthday gift or new surprise;
more games to play; a windy day for a kite one flies;
coins that shine; toys that squeak;
a trip to the zoo at the end of each week.
But Belles and Bills persist in their story.
Some even mention forgotten glory.
Children go home to eat, to sleep.
Belles and Bills their vigils keep;
falling leaves and darkening sky
shows them their truth and the children's lie.
Nothing is forever; all things die.
Then, Belles and Bills go back to flats,
to wait -- to wait till morning comes.
They listen to the rustling rats
and slowly sip their gins or rums.
Eyes are glazed; minds are dazed.
The atmosphere grows dim and hazed.
They will await, once more, the sun's first ray --
the birth, in the park, of another day.
Before they leave, they look all around,
surveying the world to which they're bound;
then, they shuffle away, with airs of sadness
at being, always, on the verge of madness.
The echo of an unheard bark
reverberates throughout the park.
Fallen leaves and darkened sky
confirm the truth.  Children lie.

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  1. Date: 10/17/2012 5:01:00 PM
    This was quite a poetic gem.

  1. Date: 1/26/2012 3:44:00 PM
    OMG! What a profound master poet you are! My paltry words of praise can’t touch this nor the inner voice that leaves one spell bound after absorbing both parts. Bravo! Bravo! This poem is going into my favorites and you are indeed a favorite new poet of mine.

  1. Date: 6/9/2011 1:33:00 PM
    Interesting work that you have penned..I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon...Sara

    Amadore Avatar Leo Larry Amadore
    Date: 6/10/2011 7:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much Sara...I hope that you read the first part of this poem, which was posted separately because of space limitations on this site...I would appreciate knowing whether your comment applies to the entire poem, or just to the second part (the part to which your comment is attached.) Thanks again for reading my work, and I will certainly look for and comment on more of yours.