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The Invitation

December 25th-  The Christmas Wedding

Surrounded by seasonal silver bells
Scarlet passionate pink poinsettias sit
Foliage scenery 
Entwined by Christmas and Wedding bliss
Frosty winter weather warmed up by:
Rings of “I Do!”

The eyes of Eve hide underneath a white veil
A bride walking down the misty mistletoe isle
Wondering why the majestic mustang moon sank without trace?

The aroma of pine trees idle into the death-defying fog
Fine firm decorated ribbons snug unopened gifts
Mistletoes wait above the tenable tint threshold
Kissing and Cheering
New Christmas Vows
In her hands, a beautiful bouquet 
-Bridal flowers for the maids
Forsaken by dark dusky dullness wedding cloud
Flustering fragrance thicken the chestnut cold air
Ornaments endured dreary tears

Despising the drapes of fog
That covers the newly wed winter show
Harmony withdrew from that winter wonderland
A white gown, not meant to be
Christmas crushed by her greed
The unkind erratic earth exchanged her own silent vows
In a horrifying hoary haze
A heavy foggy breeze dropped in like debris,
Blowing her tiara dreams away
On this very exact Christmas Day


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  1. Date: 1/18/2015 4:35:00 PM
    This is a wonderful piece of writing, tragic and poignant. The imagery is stunning, a great poem. Also, thank you for your comment on my own poem; I really appreciate it.

  1. Date: 6/11/2014 11:46:00 AM
    Beautiful imagery in an interwoven Christmas wedding atmosphere. Drapes....bride's veil & mist....swirling to a tragic end. Beautiful epic poem! // paul

  1. Date: 5/22/2014 1:49:00 AM
    Mel was here! Seriously, Christmas is my favorite time of year, and I've tried several times to capture the magic, but you did...with an unfortunate twist. Makes a guy want to know more...luv...mel

  1. Date: 2/18/2014 11:07:00 AM
    Hope you enjoyed your christmas and new year this is actually what i would call it an alliteration very well expressed loved it................. missin you a lot

  1. Date: 1/23/2014 2:05:00 AM
    You remind me of Eve PD., a mystery in the moonlight. Not of greed though, just a driven need to be. Wonderful symbolism left somewhat unexplained, and strong use of the senses, smells of pines I duely adore. Strong use of alliteration too, as you know, one of my favorite instruments. Beautifully haunting. J.A.B.

  1. Date: 1/22/2014 8:51:00 PM
    Late congrads on this one it is beautiful again the second time around. i'm just sick of winter though but your write warms my heart dear, i love ship wreck history maybe history in general lol. i love the titanic, not the movie but the real ship, another souper told me about the empress and after doing reseach i wrote the poem it just hit my fancy. cheri

  1. Date: 1/15/2014 9:45:00 PM
    DESTROYER MY SIS, Congrats, with your EPIC CHRISTMAS is winning poem... TAKE CARE :) ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 1/3/2014 11:48:00 PM
    Lovely descriptions, Linda. I like the way you formatted this. Congrats!

  1. Date: 1/3/2014 3:11:00 PM
    a different take on the theme so well quilled, PD.. sweet congrats!

  1. Date: 1/3/2014 12:41:00 PM
    hi Linda good pen congrats on win Shadow x smile hug

  1. Date: 1/3/2014 10:28:00 AM
    great write Linda...congrats on your win

  1. Date: 1/3/2014 6:45:00 AM
    This is a wonderful poem Linda, Congrats on a well deserved win......Roger

  1. Date: 1/3/2014 4:01:00 AM
    Enjoyed your epic poem and congrats on the win, Linda

  1. Date: 1/3/2014 2:03:00 AM
    My heartfelt congratulations my dearest sis Linda! Biggest hugs! This is a perfect epic in every way. Thank you so much for your support and for teaching & inspiring me to write epic poems. A Happy, Happy New Year and Advance Happy Three Kings! lovem4evr sis & BFF, Leonora

  1. Date: 12/13/2013 5:05:00 PM
    A very heartbreaking and tragic story of love gone wrong. I really enjoyed this poem, Linda! The imagery is just wonderful and enchanting! Congratulations on your win!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem. I appreciate it very much!

  1. Date: 12/13/2013 8:04:00 AM
    Congrats on your win for this extra ordinary poem. Wish you Merry Christmas in advance. Loved always, my friend, bl

  1. Date: 12/12/2013 7:11:00 PM
    Wedding gone bad! yike! Congrad's on your win!

  1. Date: 12/12/2013 8:55:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win friend PD :) advance Merry Christmas!!! hugs and kisses ;)

  1. Date: 12/12/2013 7:17:00 AM
    congrats on a fine win PD...Merry Christmas

  1. Date: 12/12/2013 6:09:00 AM
    Congratulations pd xx