The Enormity of Existence, Part 2

This world is so heavy upon us, 
we scarcely can know of the Other 
as it impinges on this world 
of flesh and bone, air and water,
sky and mountain, man and woman....

Our bodies are too fine--
instruments of unending sensation 
from birth to death, 
our brains so vast in imagination...
yet so small in comprehension.

We live in fear and longing: 
we sin...repent...sin again.
We pass by our neighbors 
with barely a glance,
while we turn on our beloved 
with blindness, with deafness--
little wonder why we despair.

The great wonder is--
why we are loved...
each of us so difficult,
so repulsive at times...
yet with just a slight 
turn of the magnet
and we are bound 
together once again.

The most magnificent wonder 
of all is why He loves us--
blind little bugs scurrying
about in the dark, sentient 
of the mud but insensate 
of the glory until we are 
transformed by the Light
and can see Heaven cupped 
in our hands and feel, at 
last, the Eternal beating 
deep within our hearts.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 2/22/2020 5:55:00 PM
Back to say congratulations on this wonderful, probing write. Well earned top placement.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 2/23/2020 9:41:00 AM
Thanks again, Sam!
Date: 1/30/2020 11:18:00 AM
Hi L.J. Congratulations on your top placement. Your question of how we can still be loved by God is wonderfully expressed in metaphor and strong imagery - "blind little bugs" - really wonderful.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 1/30/2020 2:58:00 PM
Thanks Sam-- it's hard to see things from the Divine p.o.v., but I keep tryin'!
Date: 10/6/2018 4:02:00 PM
Your wonderful poem is filled with truths "our brain is so vast in imagination yet ... so small in comprehension."these words jumped out at me because of their veracity. Congratulations your deserving first placement L.J. : )
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L. J. Carber
Date: 10/6/2018 4:30:00 PM
Thanks Connie, much appreciated-- and yes, it is strange to be a human being, isn't it?
Date: 10/6/2018 10:31:00 AM
Congrats on your top win, LJ. Well penned.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 10/6/2018 4:30:00 PM
Thank you, Line
Date: 4/9/2015 3:08:00 PM
A 7 for the wonderful spiritual write. Blessings Eve
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Date: 7/1/2013 10:11:00 PM
LEN, this is a nice winning poem in PD's contest. <3 SKAT <3
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Date: 6/26/2013 4:59:00 PM
Wondrous!!!!! Congratulations
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Date: 6/26/2013 4:32:00 PM
Len, CONGRATULATIONS~ and thank you for having patients and enjoying my contest... sorry I took a week in posting the winners. I had much fun in closing my Encouragement / Inspiration contest. many poems helped touch the moment. take care and have yourself a lovely day.... LINDA
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