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The Captain of Destiny Industry

God asked Noah to construct an ark
He provided him a detailed instruction
God gave him a head start, prior to construction
It would have three decks, a door and a window as its bench mark

Then Noah And Sons Ark Company (NASAC) began its task
The ark had no rudder, so the folks laughed at Noah and his boat
It needed no rudder to steer it, it only needed to float
“Umm, God do you think we can fix a rudder on this ark?” Noah ask

“Noah my son, this is where most folks miss my boat
To need a rudder means you know how to arrive at your destination
My son I will steer you to safety, I am your salvation
I’ll finance the project; here you are with the bank note”

So NASAC constructed the ark out of their comfort zone
But how did Noah get all the animals on board?
God supernaturally directed the animals like a horde
About 80,000 animals went in, each identical sexes like a clone

It was full with thousands of animals with a smell of a zoo
Most of the animals who took a nap during the weary ride were bored
The King Lion, the Eagle and the Elephants were the Executive board
The young pigeons in the ark often “coo”

But was old Noah sure it would rain? Was it a mystery?
Did he project the atmospheric weather forecast?
Noah was indeed a wise man, he began to broadcast
No one heeded and the flood did come; it was the worst disaster in history

How many would buy a Jaguar without a steering wheel?
Are you so wise fixing your own rudder?
To steer around the mountain you encounter?
Rest in Him, for He predestinated you for the good pleasure of His will 

By faith Noah, being divinely warned of God of things not seen as yet, moved with godly fear, prepared an ark to the saving of his household, by which he condemned the world and became a heir of the righteousness which comes by faith. Heb 11:7

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  1. Date: 6/9/2013 12:24:00 AM
    Gideon, Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) Take care, and enjoy your wonderful days ahead . Always & Forever! **LINDA**

    Foli Avatar Gideon Foli
    Date: 1/7/2014 1:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks a lot Linda, wishing you all the best
  1. Date: 5/21/2013 2:50:00 PM
    Sounds like you should if you have not done so already in the contest, Noah's Ark.....enjoyed this much...thanks

    Foli Avatar Gideon Foli
    Date: 1/7/2014 1:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I will join Judy.... thanks
  1. Date: 4/23/2013 1:03:00 PM
    Hello Gideon: Great poem!!! I really liked the way you compared purchasing a jaguar without a steering wheel to trying to navigate a boat without fixing the rudder. PEACE.

    Foli Avatar Gideon Foli
    Date: 1/7/2014 1:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    oh thanks a lot Sheol...hope to enjoy your poems too.
  1. Date: 4/19/2013 10:19:00 PM
    Hi Gideon, "Welcome to the poetry soup. My name is Linda; many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. I'm stopping by to invite you on over to my latest contest --called the “7 wonders” I'm hoping you will consider the enjoyment and challenges we offer in our contest. If you like, please consider my contest. You can find the contest page on the top left hand side. I’m looking forward in reading and enjoying your poems in the future. Today I will start by reading all you have posted this far..... Thanks @-> LINDA <-@"

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 8:17:00 PM
    Gideon, a lovely poem. uplifting at it's most :-), Wishing you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up by clicking on my name anytime you see it.. Luv~*~SKAT"

    Foli Avatar Gideon Foli
    Date: 1/7/2014 1:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks a lot Love, hope to read more from you too.