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the DARK POET -contest-

A little tale about the real me
twisted all inside as can be
the visions of the end
is all i see
F.T.W. setting my self free

waking up with the thought 
i survived.
"SURVIVED!"  another dream
holding my head under water
no one can hear my screams

cursing each and everyone 
for this demon has won
taking over my soul
ripping out all my sanity
reliving over and over
the day i took my own life
my own hell is more than an element of a  dream
slicing my most deepest vain, with the dullest  knife
a fear so dark lashing out a terrorized scream

reality, to sanity, losing my main brain
a deep dark fear lurking, red blood stain
creeping up a MOSH caught  in the way
F.T.W. we are all to blame
inside I dread the day of my rebirth
shout my guts into space for I  have  faced
to slow down the beast with a  potent power of radiation 
a frame out demon skinning the philosophy you once new
an evil more than vile,   a poison worst than sin

motivating his way in to my voyage of my on tormented life
a DEMON dust from Neptune possessing   me its rings
never to think in my wildest observation
I would encounter my own depths of a zero pointless energy
giving to my by the lighted gravity of humane
restricted  on the eyes, for the ones  who do not wish to see
a trance faster than the speed of light
ending myself to a forever night
fighting with them who reject to see a demon so twisted
dropped from the cosmos of realistic 
no one wanting to acknowledge the relativistic way  
that time  travel out*** and Demons travel in***
lost forever in this rotten being
making me shout out loud to he 
who knows my name
dealing  with the devils  Darkest  Poet
in a Dark Poets game

just a dream soupppppers lol. : )

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  1. Date: 4/21/2013 1:18:00 PM
    quite nice the way you did this,,, made me think of a few movies and my poem Fireflies ;} And the dream I had last night about my daughter disappearing down a dark street. Thank you for making me one of your fav poets,xx

  1. Date: 12/21/2012 4:33:00 AM
    this is so visual, so realistic, love your dreams, and your creations....

  1. Date: 10/28/2010 9:27:00 PM
    P.D.--How are you doing? Why are you leaving? Are you just taking a break? Do you have writer's block? I think you are holding out on a big secret, and I feel left out....see around sometime.

  1. Date: 8/14/2010 9:48:00 PM
    This is the 87th comment! w00t!

  1. Date: 8/14/2010 9:47:00 PM
    P.D., Nikko said to pass my stanzas to her first? Well I sent them off. I don't know why I had writer's block? Never had it before! I was getting worried, but I came through it the end....only took me a few minutes lol. My stanzas aren't as cool as yours, but I tried. So glad that I did them though~Chris

  1. Date: 7/29/2010 9:44:00 AM
    this one is very Good the way you describe ....if its a dream we live in dreamin and awake state yet i believe we sojourn live in a mysterious ways. Good write D ..

  1. Date: 7/6/2010 12:36:00 AM
    i love this

  1. Date: 6/13/2010 11:12:00 AM
    I Like it, Very Dark-just the way I like it!~Tirzah~

  1. Date: 6/5/2010 1:50:00 PM
    wow cda really has a crush on you!

  1. Date: 6/5/2010 4:25:00 AM
    I love your vibe lol you got something .. well written ... big smile thanks for the comments on my poetry its much appreciated love Jayne

  1. Date: 6/1/2010 7:53:00 PM
    sheesh it gave me goosebumps!

  1. Date: 6/1/2010 6:29:00 AM
    Hey, this is quite a slam! I have been watching some slam poetry recently and they are very interesting. I like the flow of energy. Great job! Joseph

  1. Date: 5/30/2010 2:23:00 PM
    Congratulations on your 3rd place win in the contest, P.D. Well-deserved indeed! Peace, Audrey

  1. Date: 5/29/2010 10:02:00 PM
    Pfffft@Comment about true identity. Win what round? I didn't Slam you? I didn't give any info at all my little Darkwing Duck. You can Slam me how you wish, it will always feel good to me no matter what. And as for being a crybaby, I have seen and survived too many true dark times around this planet to worry about some words. P.D, you can say what you want, I will always enjoy having you around. Chris.

  1. Date: 5/29/2010 7:55:00 PM
    P.D you win! If you don't stop, I will reveal your true identity before you have the chance! Muuuharrrrr haaaarrr hardy har har!! Naw, I really couldn't do that to you anyway, my friend.

  1. Date: 5/29/2010 7:22:00 PM
    Whoooooo Hoooooooo!! P.D, you just hit 80 comments with this one. Congrats, my friend!! Chris.

  1. Date: 5/29/2010 7:21:00 PM
    Yes, almost at 80 comments!!

  1. Date: 5/29/2010 7:20:00 PM
    Ha ha! P.D, stop making fun of me already, you Darkwing Ducky. ;D

  1. Date: 5/29/2010 6:38:00 PM
    Hey since I am here, I have a question for you. How do you stay in the top of the Community Builders Top Commenters? I just took a look, and you are way up there. That must really burn you out sometimes, making so many comments, no? Peace out P.Diddy.

  1. Date: 5/29/2010 6:36:00 PM
    Comment #75!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!