The Dark Poet -Contest-

A little tale about the real me
twisted all inside as can be
the visions of the end
is all i see
F.T.W. setting my self free

waking up with the thought 
i survived.
"SURVIVED!"  another dream
holding my head under water
no one can hear my screams

cursing each and everyone 
for this demon has won
taking over my soul
ripping out all my sanity
reliving over and over
the day i took my own life
my own hell is more than an element of a  dream
slicing my most deepest vain, with the dullest  knife
a fear so dark lashing out a terrorized scream

reality, to sanity, losing my main brain
a deep dark fear lurking, red blood stain
creeping up a MOSH caught  in the way
F.T.W. we are all to blame
inside I dread the day of my rebirth
shout my guts into space for I  have  faced
to slow down the beast with a  potent power of radiation 
a frame out demon skinning the philosophy you once new
an evil more than vile,   a poison worst than sin

motivating his way in to my voyage of my on tormented life
a DEMON dust from Neptune possessing   me its rings
never to think in my wildest observation
I would encounter my own depths of a zero pointless energy
giving to my by the lighted gravity of humane
restricted  on the eyes, for the ones  who do not wish to see
a trance faster than the speed of light
ending myself to a forever night
fighting with them who reject to see a demon so twisted
dropped from the cosmos of realistic 
no one wanting to acknowledge the relativistic way  
that time  travel out*** and Demons travel in***
lost forever in this rotten being
making me shout out loud to he 
who knows my name
dealing  with the devils  Darkest  Poet
in a Dark Poets game


      -contest-
just a dream soupppppers lol. : )
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 4/21/2013 1:18:00 PM
quite nice the way you did this,,, made me think of a few movies and my poem Fireflies ;} And the dream I had last night about my daughter disappearing down a dark street. Thank you for making me one of your fav poets,xx
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Date: 12/21/2012 4:33:00 AM
this is so visual, so realistic, love your dreams, and your creations....
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Date: 7/29/2010 9:44:00 AM
this one is very Good the way you describe ....if its a dream we live in dreamin and awake state yet i believe we sojourn live in a mysterious ways. Good write D ..
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Date: 7/6/2010 12:36:00 AM
i love this
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Date: 6/13/2010 11:12:00 AM
I Like it, Very Dark-just the way I like it!~Tirzah~
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Date: 6/5/2010 1:50:00 PM
wow cda really has a crush on you!
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Date: 6/5/2010 4:25:00 AM
I love your vibe lol you got something .. well written ... big smile thanks for the comments on my poetry its much appreciated love Jayne
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Date: 6/1/2010 7:53:00 PM
sheesh it gave me goosebumps!
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Date: 6/1/2010 6:29:00 AM
Hey, this is quite a slam! I have been watching some slam poetry recently and they are very interesting. I like the flow of energy. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 5/30/2010 2:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your 3rd place win in the contest, P.D. Well-deserved indeed! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 5/28/2010 2:42:00 PM
An interesting point of view. Enjoyed the read. Terry
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Date: 5/28/2010 10:10:00 AM
hya i am glad its just a dream ..but wow i have shivers up my spine lololol very good !!! sarah x
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Date: 5/27/2010 10:29:00 PM
I once knew a dark poet. Beauty in every line he spoke yet haunting ghosts in his past. Of course I hope not in your case for I am very excited to read more. -Victorias
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Date: 5/26/2010 11:19:00 AM
What a brilliant poem expressed in the darkest, bloody way! Suicide, for some people is relief from pain and self-made hell. I will never suggest it to anyone...life is too sacred to take it away for some unexplainable folly. But I love the way you wrote with such imagery and suspense...It's a dreadful dream, I hope I will never dream. I have enjoyed reading it, Poet Destroey. Thanks for your kind comments. have a wonderful day. Kindest Regards, Andrew.
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Date: 5/26/2010 7:54:00 AM
Wow! very powerful. Thanks for your comment on my poem Sensitivity. I like your talent and would love for you to read and tell me what you (really) think about my poem The Fortress (part 1 & 2) if you will. I appreciate feedback from talented poets as yourself. Hope you have a great day! Scarlett
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Date: 5/26/2010 7:21:00 AM
Great win and another wonderful write!!!!
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Date: 5/26/2010 12:20:00 AM
Congratulations, P D, on your 2nd place win in the Dark Poet Contest sponsored by, SKAT a k a Irma, with this uniquely dark poem.
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Date: 5/25/2010 9:16:00 PM
"A little tale about the real me" Oh really?? :) This is great. Best read. I am forced to favorite this one.
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Date: 5/25/2010 5:37:00 PM
Yes P.D. BBF ..two days in Florida with my "honey poo" made me see the light of so many things in our relationship and its all true ..my words... he is too jealous... too insecure ...too possessive... too loving ...too insecure ...too fearful... whats a girl to do but take it with a grain of salt and enjoy life anyway... thats me ...the "Sweetheart" of luv...
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Date: 5/25/2010 2:30:00 PM
Very intensely tormentingly dark poem. Well conveyed the dark side where shadows and devils lurk. always, Susan
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Date: 5/25/2010 2:28:00 PM
hey, where is your adam/eve poem? Just waiting to see if you will reveal youself thru that contest. heehe. Anyway, put SOMETHING up!! LUv ya, andrea
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Date: 5/25/2010 9:25:00 AM
Hey P.D. my BBF so appreciate your critique' and encouragement for the contest... I wasn't gonna enter either but at the last minute these words kept rolling around in my head as I rolled around on the sand and I quick jumped up and headed for the laptop... I admit it... I AM ADDICTED TO POETRY and my SUPER SOUP FAMILY...luv.. from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/25/2010 7:39:00 AM
This is a winner in the "dark poet's game".... very nice
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Date: 5/24/2010 6:37:00 PM
conzrats, gotta love the dark side every now and than, tho i have to say yours is better than mine by far... you rock with love--DDL
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Date: 5/24/2010 8:13:00 AM
Impressive... You really showed off your dark side in this one! Nice writing!
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