Tears

The sky cries water always without taste human eye tears of salt

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/15/2010 6:07:00 AM

Good comparison..If rain were tears, soon the earth would be a wasteland...."Rev My Throttle" was a working of a memory...I was gladden that you too got pleasure from reading my work..Sara

Date: 11/13/2010 12:53:00 PM

Interesting analogy and personification to convey your thoughts. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Keep on writing. Karen

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 11/4/2010 10:01:00 AM

What a beauty in your three lines. This Haiku is a brilliant piece of writing reflecting one of the most sensitive emotions of human beings 'Tears.' In the taste of your tears, you have said a lot. Great write my friend and many thanks for your unique precious comments on my poem Mysteries of Human Hairs. Love and best wishes Ravindra......Honesty Gimbo

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/4/2010 8:54:00 AM

Very true Honesty..and my "Tear Drops" reflects the same today luv.. enjoyed your analogy poetry on this rainy day in N.J..luv..

Sylvia Coulstock

Date: 11/3/2010 5:46:00 PM

Honesty if you are a man as indicated by one of your comments given here.I am so sorry. I thought Honesty was a girls name.Here in England although rarely used it's always feminine.What I said prev stands but I regard you as a poet,not the female version.It doesn't alter from the fact I thought your Haiku was very good and I enjoyed it.Once again sincere apologies. Love June

Sylvia Coulstock

Date: 11/3/2010 5:35:00 PM

Liked your profound Haiku Honesty.As well as loving your words,I hope you don't mind me saying but I love your name.It has a lovely sound to it for a name for a poetess,which you undoubtedly are judging by your words here.I'm glad you enjoyed my bit of fun.A tongue in cheek penned because of some faults with my own body.I like to laugh and I like to love and I show it through my words,depending on my mood.Thank you for your appreciation. Love June

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 11/3/2010 1:15:00 AM

Hi Honesty 9really like your name btw) :) what a very interesting perspective on tears-- I really like how you contrasted heaven's & people's tears-- nikko :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/2/2010 8:51:00 PM

A very interesting haiku, Honesty. Your last name looks Japanese or something. Where are you from? LUv, Andrea

Daver Austin

Date: 11/2/2010 3:38:00 PM

Oh yes! I like this mucho, mucho. Love, Dave

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/2/2010 2:05:00 PM

I can see how you earned the name "Honesty." That is a wonderful quality in your writing. Excellent haiku! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/2/2010 1:55:00 PM

Good but awesome disrtinction you have penned between the two, Honesty

John Rhinem

Date: 11/2/2010 1:41:00 PM

Smile ~ "Thanks" for stopping by &, loved the heart & soul amid this compassioned poe ~ "My Love & Warmth Always Unto, 'You & Your Loves,'" John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Day My Friend; Bye!":) ~

John Rhinem

Date: 11/2/2010 1:38:00 PM

Smile ~ A seemingly very deep emotion expressed here my dear friend; always a blessing to find such treasures of depth ~ And "Yes," the sky does cry many tears for countless precious lives within this place We live although, I Always try to keep my visions beyond its passing moments &, to the promise of "Neverendings Happiness & Love" wherein, no more tears shall Ever be found again!!! ~ ....Cont:)

Charles Melody Lightning Ink

Date: 11/2/2010 10:09:00 AM

very deep haiku sir,but try and maintain the normal 5 7 5 syllables of proper haiku.more power to ur pen bro.