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Tale less rhyme-2

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Tale less rhyme-2

Tale less rhyme


A tail rhyme I wanted to write
A perfect one without a blight
For the 'Black eyed' to see

If it turns out to be 'eye rhyme'*
Don’t consider it a big crime
It's my humble plea.


*  Words spelled similarly but pronounced differently.

30/ Nov/12
For Black eyed Susan’s contest

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  1. Date: 2/12/2013 10:38:00 PM
    gosh, how in the world did I ever miss this one. I always try to congratulate the winners of Susan's contests!! And I love her tail rhyme contests. You did really well here. I especially loved when you called her the "black eyed" so funny, jag! and big belated Congratulations to you.

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 11:04:00 AM
    Congratulations on your super win in Susan's "Tail Rhyme" contest Jag. Love Carol

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 10:17:00 AM
    Great thinking on this winning work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..I am glad that I chose it to read today..Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 5:01:00 PM
    Jag... another wonderful win... always~ PD

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 1:38:00 PM
    Another stunner jag I like this approach. Congratulations xx

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 9:51:00 AM
    congrats Jag on a cool and clever write luv and super win..hope all is well ..

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 9:09:00 AM
    the fact that u wrote this so quickly is also a sign of your quick-wittedness...great job!

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 8:08:00 AM
    Good one, congrats.

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 7:42:00 AM
    I think u and I were thinking similarly when we tackled this contest, don'tcha think? Fun write, Jag...and nice word play! :) gwendolen

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 7:37:00 AM
    Haha...Enjoyed this one very much jag!Congrats on the win.

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 4:55:00 AM
    jag, how could writing such sweet rhyme be a crime? :)

  1. Date: 12/1/2012 3:18:00 AM
    Nice try pl keep it up hmm.

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 12:40:00 PM
    Jag, ha..love this... good luck in the contest..pd

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 8:54:00 PM
    great write Jag,minor crime,minimum sentence,lol,best of luck