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Tale Less Rhyme-2

Tale less rhyme A tail rhyme I wanted to write A perfect one without a blight For the 'Black eyed' to see If it turns out to be 'eye rhyme'* Don’t consider it a big crime It's my humble plea. * Words spelled similarly but pronounced differently. 30/ Nov/12 For Black eyed Susan’s contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/12/2013 10:38:00 PM
gosh, how in the world did I ever miss this one. I always try to congratulate the winners of Susan's contests!! And I love her tail rhyme contests. You did really well here. I especially loved when you called her the "black eyed" so funny, jag! and big belated Congratulations to you.
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Date: 12/7/2012 11:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your super win in Susan's "Tail Rhyme" contest Jag. Love Carol
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Date: 12/7/2012 10:17:00 AM
Great thinking on this winning work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..I am glad that I chose it to read today..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 12/4/2012 5:01:00 PM
Jag... another wonderful win... always~ PD
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Date: 12/4/2012 1:38:00 PM
Another stunner jag I like this approach. Congratulations xx
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Date: 12/4/2012 9:51:00 AM
congrats Jag on a cool and clever write luv and super win..hope all is well ..
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Date: 12/4/2012 9:09:00 AM
the fact that u wrote this so quickly is also a sign of your quick-wittedness...great job!
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Date: 12/4/2012 8:08:00 AM
Good one, congrats.
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Date: 12/4/2012 7:42:00 AM
I think u and I were thinking similarly when we tackled this contest, don'tcha think? Fun write, Jag...and nice word play! :) gwendolen
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Date: 12/4/2012 7:37:00 AM
Haha...Enjoyed this one very much jag!Congrats on the win.
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Date: 12/3/2012 4:55:00 AM
jag, how could writing such sweet rhyme be a crime? :)
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Date: 11/30/2012 12:40:00 PM
Jag, ha..love this... good luck in the contest..pd
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Date: 11/29/2012 8:54:00 PM
great write Jag,minor crime,minimum sentence,lol,best of luck
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