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take my Breath

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take my Breath

No sunshine, no rain,

no fortune,  no fame,

to the hell from which he came,

is in the evils and the creation for we speak of his name,

the world will burn deep, to slumber and sleep,

for to exist in the living is gone in a peep  

for his judgement will bring pain,

an slowly his mind will turn to insane,

so deep and so hollow, so my life is a shame,

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