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Take Me Away, Alive Or Awake Part 2

He glares at me And the scene glares right back at us A pool of oozing red surrounds us The bed of roses shimmering The black silk with stains of velvet The shiny golden candles painted with a dark ruby Everything is Crimson, Everything is Blood Everything is Beautiful. As he sees the ache as I struggle to hold him, the helplessness of enduring He grabs me easily and flattens me on the pool of red As I start to close my eyes And bits of life depart me He stands up, begins to abandon this magical place My vision begins to blur, my hearing diminishing As I no longer hear the leaving footsteps My heart beating. Still beating; its rhythms distant. It Screams The Shout! The Final Plead, Calling, Whispering.. Upon the shallow silence And he turns back He glances at me, at my all And runs to hold me To Kiss me Forever…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/19/2012 6:39:00 AM
The sun is shining bright here this morning in Ohio and I am enjoying reading some very interesting and excellent writing. So happy to see yours among the ones I am able to read this fine day before I get busy. Have a wonderful day and thank you so much for sharing your poetry with us Louzana. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/19/2012 10:29:00 AM
Thank you so very much :D <3 You are Most kind c:

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