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Take Me As I Am,

Hear Me, Listen to me with you heart,let your guide be your soul hold me up so high, let your love talk this time Speak to me, Allow your mouth to utter the very words your heart has not yet spoken Listen to me, Hear what my tongue has professed and not what my lips have concealed wanting me to feel what you feel See me, Look into my eyes, and see this beautiful butterfly just waiting to take off into the sky and touch life Carry me, Lift me up when my spirits are down when I am consumed with fear afraid to breathe, this breath of life Trust in me, Believe in all that I have shown you, in all that I am, and everything that I do Love me, Caress me with your hands, all that you feel, take me as I am, paint all the colors that you see acknowledge my imperfections and love each one tenderly Water me, Let your spring flow so deep within my roots flourishing me with all your sweetness Plant me, Hide me in your heart, just beneath your wings like a seashell buried in the sand, I only want to be Discovered....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/6/2009 4:54:00 AM
Lovely... absolutely amazing. The images are wonderfully painted by your words... Thank you for this work of art! G*d bless.
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Date: 3/1/2009 8:21:00 PM
I love it. Like really love it. The reader feels perfectly at home within your soul. It's a calming feeling.
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Date: 2/20/2009 11:43:00 AM
Beautiful, Tyesha. That is how we should be loved/love. Great work from a lovely heart! Love, Robin
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Date: 2/19/2009 3:48:00 PM
Tyesha, thank you for your comments on "Hungry and Homeless Americans." Your poem conveys the same desire for acceptance as "Wrappings Give Way." You have great talent, Carolyn
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Date: 2/19/2009 2:35:00 PM
this is a very good poem. you are very appreciated here on the soup, and I hope you are well taken care of in the other aspects of your life!good job!
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Date: 2/19/2009 5:47:00 AM
Nice structure your work is amazing...Raul
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Date: 2/18/2009 8:28:00 AM
This lovely poem has a breathless quality...it just sings with beauty. Wonderful romantic, and beautiful Tyesha! ~ Carrie
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Date: 2/17/2009 9:41:00 PM
wonderfully written, the words flowing in so beautifully!! very expressive your writes!! each line very well penned!! ~ Arany
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Date: 2/17/2009 7:51:00 PM
Amazing Ty, your heart sings in this one. Very beautifully done. Laurie
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Date: 2/17/2009 7:01:00 PM
I want to thank you for your kind comments on my poetry you certainly do have a wonderful heart - You know I really do love this poem it is what love should be and it's so rare in these times to see people actually realizing and expressing the unending value of love - These days it seems that sex is what most people attribute love to - Don't get me wrong I'm far from celibacy but its the spiritual bond that makes it all so beautiful - I loved your poem it is truly a gift to read - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/17/2009 6:54:00 PM
Tyesha - What a beautiful and deep poem in regards to your inner-self - You know I think you deserve no less than what you have written - Most of my life I was on drugs and that type of lifestyle greatly hinders a person's view of what true love actually is and destroys relationship's - My wife has changed my entire being both physical and spiritual - She has nursed me back to health over the last two years and I give her what you have penned and I hope you find this also - YF4L - God Bless,MJ
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Date: 2/17/2009 5:37:00 PM
~"Perhaps You Have The Beauty of Heaven, Which Shines Through Your Precious Eyes!!?"~ Any or either dear lady!? I truly wish and hope, that all Your lifes and hearts wishes, longings and dreams, shall forever come to be!!!~"Love & Warmth Always To You & All Your Loves, Forever, John!"~"Have A Very Lovely & Wonderful Evening Dear Lady~Bye!":)
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Date: 2/17/2009 5:31:00 PM
Smile~"So Very Very Beautiful, Within EveryWay!!!"~"Hello Blessed & Gifted Tyesha!!!"~This is such a tender, longing and wonderful write dear lady!!!~Actually, to this point I believe, it is the very best write of Yours which I have read~and I have read a few of Yours thus far~and they are always so extremely well written, crafted and lovely!!! I do not know why it is? But I always think of "Christ" when I read Your gifted and soulful writes!!!"....cont....
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