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Take a walk.

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Take a walk.

 Come take a walk with me,
 we can both help our misery.
 you need me, I need you,
 no more pretending,
 about us two.
 Let us show the rest,
 what we already know,
 no more, this circus show.
 We can walk hand in hand,
 I don't care what the other's
 say,
 I only care for you,
 today and every day.

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  1. Date: 7/17/2008 9:50:00 AM
    Your feelings come out strong in this read and as well come through clearly and with a smooth flow. Very well written. Michael