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Stop Playing With That!

Keep playing with that and you will go blind, young man! Every boys' nightmare... Won 5th place in the "Redneck Psalms, Improve Human Foible" by John Freeman A. Green

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/6/2010 12:48:00 PM

I was really glad to see this in the winners' circle, Amy. Sooo funny! Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/3/2010 7:07:00 AM

Congratulations Amy on your win in John Freeman's contest "Redneck Psalms,Improve Human Foible". Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/3/2010 6:04:00 AM

Congrats Awesome Amy on your winning poem (so cute to bring this one up) did I say up? in the Redneck Psalms contest with these wise words and awesome advice... we had lots of boys in our family so it made me think back and smile ..granny got after everyone..haha.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii.. AlohA..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/2/2010 11:53:00 PM

oh, boy, you sure picked a good one, Amy. Congratulations on your win! lUv, Andrea

John Freeman

Date: 7/2/2010 10:15:00 PM

My, My Amy, I never would have dreamed a female wrote that.Smile! Congratulations on taking a 5th place in my contest. Agape, Moses

Ralph Taylor

Date: 7/1/2010 5:02:00 PM

Don't know for sure but if it were true there would be a lot more blind men around! LOL. Great write, Amy. xxxRalph

John Trusty

Date: 7/1/2010 10:00:00 AM

Amy, this really cracked me up, GOOD JOB. However, to all the guys out there, "Git a grip on yourself" because "Hindsight is always 20/20" and if Amy is only half right then "A one eyed man would still be king in the valley of the blind!" Just don't get involved in an AWAY game of pocket pool. Sorry Amy, please forgive an old sailor for the "Sea stories" lol. All the best JT