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Springtime romance contest

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Springtime romance contest

Going  out on a date calling around at nine
We are to wrap up warm no high  heels this time

Dressed in  thick sweaters trainers on our feet
We drove to the river a boat was waiting looking sleek

Jumped aboard and off  to go wind in the sails so strong
Heading for an island when everything went wrong

Wind dropped sail  hanging limp nothing we could do 
Looked at each other with smouldering looks, both knew

How we ended up on a bunk not sure that's true
But know when we made love our minds just blew

Spring is in the air so the saying  goes
Know how those rabbits feel with libidos all aglow

Peeping out of the porthole just looked  and stared
The boat had drifted to the island where a hamper had been prepared

Picnicked with a blanket on the ground, had bubbly up my nose
Ate smoked salmon with rye, dozed dreamily rubbing my toes

It has been a lovely day though not quite what we had in mind
Think spring is our  favourite season with summer not far behind.


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  1. Date: 3/11/2013 12:53:00 PM
    My kinda date....full of passion, adventure and romance. Congrats on this awesome write! Hugs

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 9:19:00 PM
    SEREN, ~ CONGRATULATIONS in FRANCINE'S lovely "SPRING IS IN THE AIR" contest. have yourself a nice and sweet smile on me...;-) LOL...xox~ PD

  1. Date: 3/9/2013 4:07:00 PM
    Ah Spring, I can't wait and hope it lingers at least a month. Very good couplets!Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/9/2013 3:16:00 PM
    ((())) Great way to go with you winning entry..Romantic work with great rhyme, rhythm and flow..Congrats.Sara

  1. Date: 3/9/2013 6:32:00 AM
    Congratulations Seren luv a romantic tale indeed xx

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 6:35:00 PM
    congrats on a fine win Seren

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 3:38:00 PM
    Congrats Seren on your win!Beautiful poem.

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 8:09:00 AM
    What a date !! woo hoo !! Enjoyed the read !! Congrats on your win !!

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 6:38:00 AM
    Congratulations Seren on a very well deserved win...Donna

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 11:56:00 PM
    Sounds like spring was late but spring fever wasn't. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 11:47:00 PM
    cute little tale told, many congrats on your win in the contest Seren

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 1:05:00 AM
    VERY romantic, stuck on that boat that way. And I love how you topped it off with the picnic. Very delightful.

    Date: 2/25/2013 5:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    bet that's where the expression about Rocking the boat comes from lol ....Seren
  1. Date: 2/23/2013 8:10:00 AM
    Seren ha love this, how was the salmon? he he, sex on a boat! woohoo....David

    Date: 2/23/2013 9:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Want to rock my boat. Haha. Glad you liked the poem....Seren
  1. Date: 2/22/2013 11:59:00 PM
    Loved your poem and how it spoke about unexpectedly making love. Sound like right place right time.

    Date: 2/23/2013 4:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    if only!!!! Seren
  1. Date: 2/22/2013 5:01:00 PM
    Sounds like true love to me....very cute....

    Date: 2/22/2013 10:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    i wish Donna, thanks for stopping by...Seren
  1. Date: 2/22/2013 1:52:00 PM
    A lovely Spring affair! ;) Always a pleasure to read your writes and to hear from you. Light & Love

    Date: 2/22/2013 10:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Debbie for stopping by and commenting....Seren
  1. Date: 2/22/2013 10:11:00 AM
    soup mail Seren

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 7:53:00 AM
    This is so beautiful, quite the gorgeous write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful piece this morning, such a wonderful poem! What a masterful spring time write, I can tell you just love the Spring, maybe more than the Summer(a little maybe)! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 4:30:00 AM
    Yes, I think he was right about the high heels, Seren...sounds like one of those magical days that you will always remember...Great poem! - Tim