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Sparkling Stars, Shining Sun

The sky would be dark if it weren't for stars They sparkle in the night with their brilliance The stars twinkle with light, they leave no scars Overcoming clouds with resilience With them is a dazzling, bright, glowing moon They beam down at a peaceful empty street Waiting, knowing that the sun will come soon The moon stays so she and the sun can meet But the moon must go as the sun glows bright The brightness reigns as the sun takes the stage The day begins and once more rules the light The red in the sky, the color of rage Reflects the chaos of a new day "We are much better," the stars always say

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Date: 11/17/2011 6:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Moses' "Give Me Your Best Shot" contest Jacque. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/15/2011 11:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this wonderful write! Lori
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Date: 11/14/2011 6:26:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of John Freeman, Jacque
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Date: 11/13/2011 8:07:00 PM
Yes, the sun can get a bit much sometimes and the stars never do. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/13/2011 6:11:00 PM
perfect sonnet form Jacque, I enjoyed your message ...A worthy poem for a win. Congratulations, Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/12/2011 8:13:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Jacque. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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