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Sometimes I...

Sometimes I hear voices
telling me what to do

Sometimes I feel sad
watching over you

Sometimes I want hope
to make things right again

Sometimes I want relief
to take away the pain

Sometimes I daydream
of a brighter tomorrow

Sometimes I pray for
no more days of sorrow

Sometimes I feel angry 
like I could damage you

Sometimes I feel subdued
enjoying ignoring you

Sometimes I need love
a cuddle or a kiss

Sometimes I need sex
this is a hit or miss!

Sometimes I wish that
all was happy and well

Sometimes I imagine 
a life of fairytales.

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  1. Date: 9/9/2009 2:31:00 PM
    This is a different poem poem from the last with a different technique showing range of style, and celebrating your varied gift. I love the repetition, the alternate rhyme scheme, and the subtle statements that make us identify with you. Great technique.

  1. Date: 9/7/2009 1:32:00 PM
    Joanne, I can really relate to this. Very well written.

  1. Date: 9/6/2009 6:26:00 PM
    I like your style, Joanne! It's refreshing and playful. Lovely piece. Ruben.