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We drift softly together- -
hands glazing a window filled with stars
   where row of flowers bends its twirling hips
               and curtains lift the fabric of breath,

until we become keepers in springtime hours

    blaming the grandeur of moon,

and in the stillness of dusk
      when all blossoms turn to virtues
                  deepening the fragrance of the sky,
we will find each other on a cradle
       of roses in the shade--
        a breeze disrobes our pores

stirring the glow of fireflies blazed,

till darkness swallows our fog
      amidst a prism of framed moments
           undefined by any name, while we,

in a bright pastel of a springtime,

together we drift- -

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  1. Date: 11/6/2013 9:05:00 PM
    Nette, this is a pretty deep Blame It On The Moon poem.... congrats... LOVE ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 6:41:00 PM
    This has your poetic stamp all over it. Congratulations on your winning entry. Joyce

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 6:33:00 PM
    Another breath-taking eyes just drift through each line, and become mesmerized! Lovely lovely!! Congratulations!

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 5:58:00 PM
    love the way you crafted drifts softly down the a dew drop kissing a flower....beautiful poem...congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 1:09:00 PM
    Great winning work..Way to go..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 7:31:00 AM
    another beauty another in nette congratulations xx

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 12:18:00 AM
    Such a great piece, Nette! Napakahusay! Bless you! Saludo talaga! Aja, Nette! Love,love,love! :-) - Den

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 12:25:00 AM
    Dear Nette, the beauty of this poem took me by surprise. It's perfect. Bev

  1. Date: 10/26/2013 1:21:00 PM
    This is just amazing !!!

  1. Date: 10/23/2013 8:28:00 AM
    Wonderful write. The reader must also drift slowly through your words to not miss a single beautiful image.

  1. Date: 10/22/2013 10:52:00 AM
    sometimes when one reads your poetry, one forgets just how wonderful it is, because it is,,, but no matter what, the graciousness of what you write never fails, to penetrate the mind of the reader,

  1. Date: 10/22/2013 10:42:00 AM
    Beep! Very delicate flow of romantic emotions and understones of seduction written with poise and passion hidden between lines. I am amazed by your outstanding craft!

  1. Date: 10/22/2013 5:50:00 AM
    Appreciating the marvels of seasons is wisdom! Expressing in such a marvelous way the experiences is a melodic symphony to nature! Fantastic!

  1. Date: 10/22/2013 5:42:00 AM
    An enchanting mesmerizing poem ah nette yor ink crafts such impresive phrasing! Pls dont ignore readin mine latest. Tc.

  1. Date: 10/21/2013 10:17:00 PM
    My favorite line, as you probably would guess, would be, "till darkness swallows our fog..." I really enjoyed reading this enlightening poem this evening! What a powerful piece, I would certainly, "drift softly- -" Great Work!!

  1. Date: 10/21/2013 11:47:00 AM
    - Nette .... you make me yearn for a beautiful spring day .... that is soooo long to the beautiful time. - Think I have to write a poem about a cold and looooooong Norwegian winter .... cold feet, red ears and frozen nose .... lol. - Have a nice day my friend, a beautiful poem! - oxox // Anne-Lise :))

  1. Date: 10/21/2013 10:58:00 AM
    I'm amazed at how your poems seem to flow like frames of animation ---> much like how "Coraline" did. I really like your style, Nette. Ang galeng mo din! :D

  1. Date: 10/21/2013 9:41:00 AM
    I love the April's bright pastel of a season..Makes me yearn for Spring..Row of flowers bend their twirling hips..Wowzer..So full of imagery..A beauty indeed dear..Mesmerizing.

  1. Date: 10/21/2013 9:28:00 AM
    This was beautifully written. I am a bit jealous that I don’t have such a wonderful imagination and descriptive abilities. Well done :D

  1. Date: 10/21/2013 9:27:00 AM
    Stunning, again! Damn. "A breeze disrobes our pores", that line gave me goosebumps.