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Smiling Firefly

Firefly dances
confident above the toad
soaring in the night

naturehaiku

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/27/2011 10:54:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in ^Rick's "One Haiku" contest Ashley. Love, Carol

Elaine George

Date: 6/26/2011 1:03:00 AM

Vivid images conveyed in this lovely Haiku, Asheley. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie

Gautami Phookan

Date: 6/26/2011 12:19:00 AM

Love fireflies.. Congrats Ashley on your win in this contest... gautami

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/25/2011 5:33:00 PM

Interesting..Congrats..Sara

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/24/2011 11:07:00 PM

This is so cute, I can just picture this vividly, Ashley with that firefly sort of teasing the toad :) Lovely image and super congrats on your win :D

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/24/2011 9:08:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the haiku contest, Ashley.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/24/2011 6:44:00 PM

Congrats Ashley on your beautiful win in the contest with this vibrant entry luv.. enjoy another great win with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/8/2011 7:02:00 PM

Beautiful images in the haiku, Ashley

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/8/2011 4:53:00 PM

that's the beauty of nature, enjoyed your haiku, take care,..p.d.

Ned Flanders

Date: 6/8/2011 1:16:00 PM

When you only use ten words in a poem it can be a struggle, not here, i even like that there is only one firefly, not an "s" to be seen, though we all know they were! Enjoyed cheers.

Smiling Firefly

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