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Smile, Son, Smile 'Nr'

Smile, son, smile Smile, son, please. I can not smile daddy, I can not smile cheese. Smile, son, smile Smile for a pound. I can not smile daddy I can not make a sound. Smile, son, smile Smile, son, dear. I can not smile daddy, I cannot smile clear. Smile, son, smile Smile, for a pound. I can not smile daddy, I can not make a sound. For: Debra Squyres' Nursery Rhyme Contest.

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/13/2013 3:24:00 PM

I like the feel of this one. Congratulations on your win.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/1/2013 3:26:00 PM

Congrats on your win..Sara

Carol Eastman

Date: 3/30/2013 10:51:00 AM

A very unique write! Congratulations on the win... a fine piece of work!

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 3/30/2013 4:42:00 AM

Many thanks to all of you. I am delightedly grateful.~A.O

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/29/2013 8:13:00 PM

A O, congratulations with your wonderful win in Debra's "Nursery Rhyme" contest. Love the message in the poem. Take care and enjoy the up coming Easter Holiday. Always*LINDA

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/29/2013 4:37:00 PM

oh I do remember this one and how enchanting I found it to be. Congrats on your win!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 3/29/2013 12:55:00 PM

Hi and congratulations on your win xx

Debra Squyres

Date: 3/29/2013 12:46:00 PM

Thank you for entering my contest and Congratulations on your win !!! Reminded me of trying to get smiles from my grandchildren...

Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 3/30/2013 4:39:00 AM

Thank you for the placement. I am honored...AO

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/23/2013 7:30:00 PM

oh this is so cute. And it reminds me of my grandkids when they were so young and my daughter was trying to get them to smile for the camera!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/23/2013 5:12:00 PM

Cute one..Must be a contest..Reads like a winner to me..Good luck..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara