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Sky was talking to me at the break of dawn, told me to forget all about myself, even if for a 
Cotton clouds became my friends, fairies i have known all my life...was delighted to see 
time had frozen and memories of a different time were all but shadows.
Caught the moon staring at me... soothing, like freedom freed from the chains of instability.
Sky was painted crimson,  pure and expressionless....motionless, i stood still...surrounded by 
i was alone....we were alone....locked up in that moment...expressions lost in time.....
i felt empty, like a feather with nothing to wish for....nothing i wanted anymore.....
This was another world, cold as ice....a vacuum which can not be filled...
we stood in silence,
words were not necessary anymore.
I was drowning in the spell....unknown emotions...captured by magic and alone to surrender 
in vain.
it hypnotized me, scared me surprisingly.....taking me to a state of hysteria...
until i was, cold and calm....until i closed my eyes and made a vow to never 
look at the sky again.

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  1. Date: 11/12/2010 8:49:00 AM
    Thanks for reading my poem and leaving the comment, Rinki. I'm sorry I misspelled your name. My vision seems to be a bit impared lately -- much like my brain. Best wishes, Carolyn

  1. Date: 11/11/2010 9:31:00 AM
    A thought-provoking poem for sure, Randy. While looking at the sky, I feel a sense of calmness that comes (I think) from realizing we are but specks in the universe. Part of a grander plan. Interesting how you went from hysteria to calmness. Captivating poem! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 10/30/2010 10:56:00 PM
    Hi Rinki :) this really made me think-- I enjoyed how you depicted the sky here and gave it depth--the sky sure can be mesmerizing sometimes and just takes my breath away-- have a great weekend! --nikko :)

  1. Date: 10/2/2010 10:15:00 PM
    Welcome to PS, Randy..I hope you will enjoy your stay here..Thanks for sharing get more exposure for your work please read the works of others and leave comments too. Have a good weekend! Peace, Audrey

  1. Date: 10/2/2010 6:26:00 AM
    Very creative and impressive narrative on sky, rinki