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Sit down wind -trickle down free verse contest

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Sit down wind -trickle down free verse contest

Why does Tilly*
break smelly wind
fed good food
best can buy
why I  wonder
do I try
to sustain levels
maybe I might
just only buy
any cheap meat
this might work
or just maybe
sit down wind
nostrils shut tight
breathe through mouth
sounds so uncouth
poor old Tilly
such a bind
that she has
wind that smells
so yuck

* Tilly my old rescued Boxer *****

Penned 17 July 2013 for trickle down free verse contest. 

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  1. Date: 7/28/2013 3:54:00 AM
    Yes that can be a joy killer.

    Date: 7/28/2013 7:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    LOL you have experienced it too...Seren
  1. Date: 7/17/2013 5:23:00 PM
    Perhaps you should install an exhaust sytem. It sounds like you need rescuing *lol*

  1. Date: 7/17/2013 7:52:00 AM
    HA! This was charming! Yeah, that scent of the dog is not entirely welcome...ever. Perhaps if you fed it human food...? ;-) Nicely done!

  1. Date: 7/17/2013 5:38:00 AM
    Ha ha, this is a very funny write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this amazingly humorous poem this morning! You are so creative when determining your subject matter for this piece, what a hilarious verse, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 7/17/2013 12:49:00 AM
    Haha just realised they have ***** the word b i t c h Hmmm thats what lady dogs are called