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Sit Down Wind -Trickle Down Free Verse Contest

Why does Tilly* break smelly wind fed good food best can buy why I  wonder do I try to sustain levels maybe I might just only buy any cheap meat this might work or just maybe sit down wind nostrils shut tight breathe through mouth sounds so uncouth poor old Tilly such a bind that she has wind that smells so yuck * Tilly my old rescued Boxer ***** Penned 17 July 2013 for trickle down free verse contest.

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Date: 7/28/2013 3:54:00 AM
Yes that can be a joy killer.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 7/28/2013 7:28:00 AM
LOL you have experienced it too...Seren
Date: 7/17/2013 5:23:00 PM
Perhaps you should install an exhaust sytem. It sounds like you need rescuing *lol*
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Date: 7/17/2013 7:52:00 AM
HA! This was charming! Yeah, that scent of the dog is not entirely welcome...ever. Perhaps if you fed it human food...? ;-) Nicely done!
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Date: 7/17/2013 5:38:00 AM
Ha ha, this is a very funny write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this amazingly humorous poem this morning! You are so creative when determining your subject matter for this piece, what a hilarious verse, Great Work!!
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Date: 7/17/2013 12:49:00 AM
Haha just realised they have ***** the word b i t c h Hmmm thats what lady dogs are called
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