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Silky White--Satin Smooth

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Silky White--Satin Smooth

The scent of Jergen's almond cream envelops me, remembering White essence of the lotion, pure reminds my heart, that she was here She's in my dreams, to ease the dawn White porcelain, her hands become The touch embraces time tonight I feel them pass across the light There is no blossoming of any tree No solace that can touch the quivering to match a keepsake memory that comes back for my company The hand that touched my face, with vows To soothe the shattered heart, and brow was white, and cool, was satin smooth and calmed the troubled seas,.... somehow
____________________________________________ 1/6/14 For Francine's Contest: "White"

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  1. Date: 3/1/2014 7:15:00 PM
    Very sweet, Carrie, I love the scent of Almond, didn't know Jergen's had one, lovely memory visuals though in this poem

  1. Date: 1/31/2014 4:33:00 PM
    This reminds me so much of my grandmother !!! Her scent was always of Jergen's almond scent. Such an elegant woman with the creamiest white skin and gentle, oh so gentle her nature. Congratulations on your first place win in Francine's contest as well. A beautiful flowing poem... love it !!!

  1. Date: 1/31/2014 1:11:00 PM
    Beautiful Carrie.....congratulations

  1. Date: 1/28/2014 9:18:00 AM
    Congrats on your win! Blessings, Stacey

  1. Date: 1/27/2014 10:56:00 PM
    My heartfelt congratulation on the win,Carrie

  1. Date: 1/27/2014 8:55:00 PM
    hey she must have just judged this one. I barely got on it, but at least I got on!! Congrats to your. It was stupendous!!!

  1. Date: 1/27/2014 8:49:00 PM
    congrats Carrie with another big win, wonderfully penned as usual

  1. Date: 1/13/2014 10:04:00 AM
    Carrie what a beautifully original write! And I love that scent lol.

  1. Date: 1/8/2014 7:31:00 PM
    You have made a beautiful nostalgic poem with this theme. Is it your mother, Carrie? That is who I am thinking.

  1. Date: 1/7/2014 1:57:00 AM
    This is so beautiful, Carrie, it haunts one's senses with the deep sense of longing in it. Im faving it!