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Silent, The Castle Doors

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Silent, The Castle Doors


Stillness held the flower, in distant gazes spilling from their palms...

A cats meow, resounding atop timeless rafters; peering at the stage

About a sixteenth century romance; dramatica, close the castle door

Hush the crowd betwixt breath they keep; frozen in this their heart

As Juliet lifts her tearful blade and Romeo's love, now fast asleep; dreams

Not weep as time does part to gather once more; aneath these stars...


...“Silent, the Castle Doors” *

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  1. Date: 8/29/2012 3:43:00 PM
    nice,,,,,, very nice sarah ;}

  1. Date: 11/17/2011 1:59:00 PM
    Absolutly beautiful.

  1. Date: 11/12/2011 3:43:00 AM
    this is beautiful, Sarah.. Thanx for stopping by :)

  1. Date: 11/11/2011 3:03:00 PM
    This reads like a precious fairy tale with nothing but happy endings. Nice touch dear one, Vie

  1. Date: 11/10/2011 3:20:00 PM
    Yes, some emotions are timeless and shared. Love, daver

  1. Date: 11/9/2011 8:21:00 PM
    sara, was just away for a day and here i am, bewilered by the refrains of your wafting lyrics... sweetly indescribable!..:) huggs and miss ya!

  1. Date: 11/9/2011 7:51:00 PM
    Perhaps they are still together dear Sarah. So romantic and I love how you weave their romance into your sweet verse. Luv, Elizabeth

  1. Date: 11/9/2011 2:09:00 PM
    Great work..Enjoyed the passionate write..So passionate was the love that Romeo and Juliet shared..Thanks for the kind review of my work..It was uplifting to have you stop by..Sara

  1. Date: 11/9/2011 10:02:00 AM
    Hi Sarah, Big hugs! I love this poem of yours, "Not weep as time does part to gather once more; aneath these stars..." such beautiful words, resounding with blessed hope for those who need it. Thank you so much for reading and commenting on my poem this morning, and surprisingly enough, I understand that heart that cannot, will not, shall not love. Sometimes it is just that way. Hugs, catie :)

  1. Date: 11/9/2011 7:24:00 AM
    true love is such a heartache. lovely pen yet again.

  1. Date: 11/9/2011 5:09:00 AM
    Beautifully penned my dear Sarah, luv shannon

  1. Date: 11/8/2011 11:55:00 PM
    Interesting lines. Going adrift though may not be so sweet for the sea can get quite rough and swallow you. Thank you for your comments on my poem. Caroline.