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Sequence-Without Words

Looks,
glances,
sweet caress
hands in secret
press-
love's
subtle
silent signs,
that whisper be
mine

lovelanterne

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Donna Golden

Date: 11/1/2009 8:03:00 PM

Subtly sensual offering, Brian. I like it! Hugs, Donna

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 10/30/2009 6:29:00 AM

Romance enhanced... by silence. Very nice poem, Brian. Always, Dane

Joyce Johnson

Date: 10/29/2009 7:03:00 PM

Short and very sweet. Thank you for your thanks and thank you for bringing us such interesting contests. Makes it so much fun. Love, Joyce

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/29/2009 5:21:00 PM

romantic, nicely penned. I have been married, for 19 years and still love to get loving gazes from my sweetie.

P Sheart

Date: 10/29/2009 3:59:00 PM

Beautiful visual sentiments put to pen. Many blessings to you and yours. Take care, Love Light Truth Patricia

Robin L. Gass

Date: 10/29/2009 3:53:00 PM

This is such a sweet and endearing Lanterne, Brian. These subtle signs speak so profoudly (and loudly) in our hearts. Beautiful work! Love, Robin

Elaine George

Date: 10/29/2009 9:35:00 AM

ACTIONS SPEAK LOUDER THAT WORDS! BEAUTIFUL LANTERNE, BRIAN. LAINIE

Marty Owens

Date: 10/28/2009 9:26:00 PM

Love this...Enjoyed...Marty

Pamela Griffiths

Date: 10/28/2009 7:15:00 PM

A lovely poem Brian, romantically inclind. Pam.

Andrew Crisci

Date: 10/28/2009 8:18:00 AM

If I could speak as romantically as I write, then I wouldn't be uncomfortable with subtle signs. Silence means more than words...to gaze into someone's eyes and start the spark of passion! Your beautiful Lanterne has that romantic touch and feeling that lovers can relate to. This one goes straight into my favorites! Best of luck and God bless. Warmest regards, Andrew.

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/28/2009 7:40:00 AM

This is so softly beautiful....subtle signs are sometimes of greater value and say more than words. I love this ....into my favs. ! Carrie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/28/2009 5:03:00 AM

What beautiful words and thought pattern.. touching on the subject of love ... thankxxx Brian for your prompt response regarding my premier membership .. will give it till Friday before contacting PS .. am still a novice with this awesome website but learning on a daily basis... woe is me on this matter... thankxxx again ... Linda-Marie